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AGENTOMEGA

In Hindsight Clear
Wednesday, June 20, 2007

Mal and Inara share a timeless moment in the face of almost-certain doom.


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Title: In Hindsight Clear

Author: AgentOmega

Genre: Drama.

Rating: K.

Pairings: Mal/Inara.

Location on Firefly Universe Timeline: During the BDM, just as Mal is about to head into the lift and glances at Inara. Mal/Inara ‘shippers, you know the moment I’m talking about.

Spoilers: Generic spoilers for the series, and slightly more specific spoilers for the BDM.

Summary: Mal and Inara share a timeless moment in the face of almost-certain doom.

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Length without header: 1 page(s) at 12-point Times New Roman font; 212 words; 1,087 characters including spaces.

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Notes: So, I was re-reading the third installment of Biggrstaffbunch’s “This is Your Brain on Drugs” – which is fantastic, by the way – and my muse just jumped out and bonked me over the head. This is the result, and if you’ve read the abovementioned chapter, you can probably see where the idea came from. Special thanks to Biggrstaffbunch for getting my muse to do something productive, and as ever, to ValerieBean for her continued support and beta work.

In Hindsight Clear

By AgentOmega

"To see a world in a grain of sand, And a heaven in a wild flower, Hold infinity in the palm of your hand, And eternity in an hour."

- Opening stanza, "Auguries of Innocence", by William Blake

They have rarely seen eye-to-eye, and even more rarely have they agreed. It is their way, opposites attracting, but never touching.

For each of them, it is the life they have chosen. It is who they are, who they were meant to be, and neither can accommodate the other.

But as he turns to leave, they lock eyes for a moment, and in that single ephemeral eternity, they speak volumes as one.

I never wanted it to end this way between us... never wanted to let so many chances pass us by.

But I did, and here we are, out of chances... here we are, out of time.

I'm sorry for all the things I said... sorry for all the things I didn't say.

I shouldn't have been so proud... shouldn't have been so stubborn.

I should have told you how I felt... should have held you close and never let go.

If I could do it over again, I'd have done things differently... I'd have made every moment count.

I love you... goodbye.

COMMENTS

Wednesday, June 20, 2007 4:10 PM

BIGGRSTAFFBUNCH


squee! i inspired someone? i jumpstarted a muse to produce THIS?! yayyy! singularly lovely, spare and tentative, stark. the words in the italics are especially well-chosen and appropriate and beautiful. thank you for this.

Wednesday, June 20, 2007 4:36 PM

KATESFRIEND


Beautiful depiction of that glance between them - every word is just perfect. Sigh. If they can just get it right after the movie!

Wednesday, June 20, 2007 5:15 PM

LEONIDAS


That was fantastic.

Wednesday, June 20, 2007 11:11 PM

AMDOBELL


Accurate but so sad. The only thing standing in Mal and Inara's way is their own stubborn natures. Sigh. If it was meant to be it would be but it still doesn't stop a corner of my little heart hoping. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Thursday, June 21, 2007 5:24 AM

VALERIEBEAN


This little tidbit has captured in awesome breathlessness that feeling of remorse. Regret for things not spoken. And it remains beautiful because, in the end, it never is spoken. It's just a look in the eyes, pouring sadness and heartache all over... it's like poetry. Beautiful.

Sunday, June 24, 2007 6:56 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Sometimes the simpliest of things can convey all the feelings in the 'Verse, IMO...and this little tale totally embodies that, AgentOmega;D

BEB

Tuesday, June 26, 2007 4:48 AM

TAMMYY2J


that was brillant i wished the Movie dealt with Malnara's relationship more


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