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ENDS WITH A HORSE (12) Part (19)

Wednesday, September 4, 2013

“Inara, I ain’t willing for you to bribe—” “Who said anything about bribes?” “What other form of persuasion you plannin’ on using? I’m not sure I like this plan.” “Mal, I can be very persuasive,” Inara replied. After a short beat, she added, with a touch of asperity, “Fully clothed.”

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ENDS WITH A HORSE (12)

Part (19)

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Who’s that knocking at my door?

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They weren’t out of the woods. In a few minutes’ time, the ship would be swarming with Feds.

The door would open, and the Space Traffic Control inspectors would board to investigate the incident. Mal would have to answer to the authorities for all the disruption he had caused to Bernadette’s air and

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Wednesday, 04 September 2013 21:11
While we just had a harrowing landing, somehow this chapter still feels like we're in the thick of it.

Sweet moment with Inara, and loved the interaction between Mal, Simon, River and Ip, exactly how River and Simon would act, and Ip fit in there well. Also Jayne's boneheaded continuing to mention the timonium - he'll wise up when the Feds get there though, Jayne's good at staring down Feds under questioning.
Thursday, 05 September 2013 11:52
Thanks so much! Loved this chapter cant wait for more!
Thursday, 05 September 2013 23:21
I hope they haven't gone from the gorram frying pan into the fire, ebfiddler. Great to see another chapter from you, will be eagerly waiting for the next one! *Xie Xie ni*, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Friday, 06 September 2013 00:33
Hey your back.... so where's the next part? I just refreshed the page and I don't see it... wait where it is?
ZOESMOM
Friday, 06 September 2013 01:56
Glad to see you back, EB! I thought River's transformation was cute, I could just picture it. Hopefully those guys can remember their false identities ;)
Friday, 06 September 2013 18:23
Oh hey, this ^ "Guest" is me, ebfiddler. For some reason, it didn't register me as me. Huh.
ZOESMOM
Friday, 06 September 2013 19:36
The forum software is no doubt picking up on your theme of obscured identity, and perhaps this is just an expression of its sense of humor! Your avatar will change next!

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