Out of the Blue - Chapter 1 by Diz

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Out of the Blue - Chapter 1
Tuesday, April 5, 2005

As River sinks deeper into her psychosis, Mal takes drastic action and realizes a decision must be made. NOTE: UNDER CONSTUCTION FOR REWRITE. BACK SOON!

CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 2954 RATING: 9 SERIES: FIREFLY

Removed for a day or so while I do a re-write based on a couple of comments here and elsewhere... back soon! That'll teach me to post my stuff before doing a good re-write and thorough look-over; sorry, I'm new to this. :)

COMMENTS

Wednesday, April 6, 2005 3:09 AM

AMDOBELL

Excellent! And all full of creepifying what-ifs that I can hardly wait for more. I was surprised Simon didn't go off his tree and hit Mal when he doped River, he does have that tendancy to lash out as a final resort. Just hope the Captain and crew take enough precautions before stepping right into the mouth of madness. Good myth, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Wednesday, April 6, 2005 4:44 AM

SITTINGDUCK

My only problem so far is that you have Simon calling Mal by his given name. The only ones who do that are Wash, Jayne, and Inara. Otherwise it's shaping up into an interesting tale.

Wednesday, April 6, 2005 5:31 AM

COSMICFUGITIVE

That was brilliant! I'm really enjoying this so far.

It reads like realism and the character voices are very well done.

More please!

- Cos.

Wednesday, April 6, 2005 7:51 AM

KAYSKY

Wow, great plot line. I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters.

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