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Bringing in the Wash (D) - Postlude to 'Loose The Gorram Moustache!' Zoe/Wash

Monday, November 7, 2005

Think dating Zoe Warren is fun? Or easy? Guess again. (Bucky & Bob lend an ear.)

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Slight future from where we left them off last.... three weeks to be exact.


BUCKY AND BOB - The sounding

board of reason is spelled B.O.B. ....................





Year 2512

Fall

Onboard Serenity

(Written by Blake and Jena)



~~cont. from http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=5716 ~~



Asleep.

He shaved his face, showered, got all smoothed up and clean, brought her dinner on a tray, and she was asleep. It wasn't as if Wash could sit down there for long with Zoe's door wide open and he wasn't about to shut it and stay in there while she was asleep. An invitation was one thing, but sitting around staring at a sick person had a creepy connotation to it.

Zoe was in slumberland and Wash took an evening meal ribbing for his 'baby face' for what was looking to be no apparent reason. He had to come up with some pretty good excuses for why he did it to.

'Why'd you grow your moustache?'

"To make me look older."

'Why'd ya shave it off now?'

"Because I was sick of it."

'Didn't ya like it boy?'

"I did."

'How long did'ya have it?'

"A few months."

'Twart much of a time.'

So on and so on. It was ludicrous in his mind only because the pilot knew why he did it and here there was no pay off after the ribs.

Oh well. Life wasn't perfect and it wasn't like this was a planned event. Like other fortunate occurrences, these things sometimes just happened. Finding Mal Reynolds was a chance happening and look where it brought him today: A shaved, baby-face reunion.

Weeks went by that they didn't talk about it once Zoe recovered. That chance happening of helping her to her room, getting her to talk a little bit about a potential hook up was long gone. So what did Wash do? What he always did. Shaved his face every gorram

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 07 November 2005 22:53
man it's great to come here and read these things its almost like having my favorite show back again ya'll are much better writers then me... that was great keep them coming!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 07 November 2005 23:04
Oooo this is getting good. I am so waiting for all of this. After all this build up their relationship is fanstastic!
I want them to get the gorram kiss out the way, but it's nice watching them stew. But I'll admit, I'm waiting for that heated first kiss.
Monday, 07 November 2005 23:05
whoops, that last comment was me. forgot to log in.

Keep the story coming mate!
Monday, 07 November 2005 23:26
Oh no Zoe, don't go rebuilding those gorram walls! Not after the poor man shaved off his rutting moustache. Loved it, which means there must be another part - *dui*?
Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 01:19
I absolutely love your stories. Please write more!! Please!! :-)
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 02:59
Shiny!
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 10:39
urgh...always give me an icky feeling when they argue, like being dipped into cold custard...

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CUB
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 20:48
I like your transitions, and the characterizations are strong. I wouldn't mind at all if the whole piece (Bringing in the Wash as a series) moved a bit faster with a few less analytical tangents. But that's probably just me.

Some entertaining stuff here.
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 05:58
Anon I - Practice and time... it's the millage. ;) Thank you!

Anon II/Eien - Hehee.... Thanks mate! As we all know they do kiss... hehee that will be coming up at some point!!

AMDOBELL - Ruttin' moustache indeed!! :)

capnzoe - Will bring more... promise. Proper board ettiquette (as taught to the newbie (me)) states to not bull doze over others... so in time. In time.

somedeepmyatery - Wow! We got a Shiny! Kewl!

Bellona - I'm sowwies. :( Gotta take the good with the bad? :D

Cub - I LOVE your feedback. I need a bit of help if you don't mind though... heh... can you point out some of the analytical tangents so I know that we're talking about the same thing? I'm a little new to this part of it all... but I love it! Keep that feedback coming!!! Thank you SO much!

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