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Aww shucks
Monday, November 28, 2005

Thanks everyone, for being so nice about my fanfic, Thank you so much for being so great and more will be added and edited now that I know everyone liked it.

P.S. It's a pretty duck outside, nice and mild with a pretty sunset.



COMMENTS

Wednesday, November 30, 2005 2:46 PM

SHINYTALENT


Hey Cub, thanks heaps for that- everyone else told me add more descriptions it's just that as much as I can see the story in my head I can't describe it.

Tuesday, November 29, 2005 3:19 PM

CUB


You did it well. You're obviously a good writer, regardless of subject matter.

I especially like your pacing. Too many people get bogged down with unnecessary descriptive embellishment.


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