My first Fanfic!!! by Gomithrous

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My first Fanfic!!!
Sunday, November 19, 2006

I just wrote my first fanfic! It's a Simon and Kaylee thing but Mal and River do appear in the story. It takes place the second "Serenity" the movie ends, it's pretty short just to get a feel for the characters. I would really appreciate if people read it and gave me some feedback so I can see where I wanna go with it. It's called "Going Well" and it can be found in the Blue Sun Room and in my profile.

Also if anyone is willing to beta for me seeing as I have none I would appreciate that. Big Damn Thank You to anyone who comments

Little Damn Thank You if you at least took the time to read it

As for the rest of you

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COMMENTS

Monday, November 20, 2006 7:58 AM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER

Commented about your tale, Gomithrous after reading it;D

And if you want someone to beta read your future works...I would be happy to help out. Just drop me a line via the PM window in my profile or e-mail me at general_iblis@yahoo.ca

BEB

Sunday, November 19, 2006 4:37 PM

BORNTOFLY

Read it, commented it. It was a REALLY good first fanfic. You said you were just getting a feel for the characters, and you've done very well at it.

Look forward to more!

Sunday, November 19, 2006 10:12 AM

NEWOLDBROWNCOAT

tried to commment over with the story, couldn't seem to get it to work. Pro'lly my fault, I don't comment much, but I hate those PURPLE llamas. The white ones are OK.

Anyway, nice and soft and gentle, the actions and dialog are right. And I love the punch-line, Mal gets it wrong , as usual.

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