Chapter 3 Is Finally Posted!! by GoramMan

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Chapter 3 Is Finally Posted!!
Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Oh man that was tougher than I thought. I promised a couple people it would be done by Sunday but that didn't pan out. My orginal outline is basically now a list of things that won't happen but the story is better for it.

I'll be making a post in the BSR message board about a very subtle theme and some other ideas behind the story. The word count, for anybody curious enough to actually be reading this, was actually 6,220. I was really afraid of it becoming an expository disaster but I think it worked out. It doesn't read like an info dump.

The tabel of contents has been rearranged again and is as follows:

Spinning Out
Prologue: The News These Days
Chapter1: Port Introspection
Chapter2: What We Hath Wrought
Chapter3: Long Time, No Piss Off
Chapter4: The Dig (tentative chapter title)
Chapter5: Communication Breakdown
Chapter6: The Deep End

Another tentative idea is a name for an arch of stories that follow this line of events that I've created. I'm thinking "Serenity: The Centrifugal Chronicals" It keeps with the theme that central planets are spinning out of control. The previously mentioned message board post will explain it in greater detail.

The new Chapter 4 will be very action packed. Can you say, "Return of the Killer Woman?"

I thought you could

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