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Monday, April 6, 2009

Im sorry i made this so long.
So im asking for help for the stories im putting up named the Wandering Angel, and its first chapter Last Flight of the Angels Hammer.

Any way ive had an attack of writers block for the better part of a week. I have a basic story but im trying to fill it out so that its an actual story instead of a list of events.

First bit is all back ground for main char. Battle over Hera (Battle of Serenity Vally) and him looking for work. Then in troduce new characters An operative and his doctor frien and another former browncoat and hacker.
then wierd stuff happens and we meet The Federation (new military power that takes up arms against alliance) Then there is the official declareation of war against Alliance.
and then i have a few battels and then not sure.

I have 5 mains but thinking i should add maybe one more.
Jackson Fauss: Lt in the independence war, faught in the battel over Hera, became a smuggler with a big syndicate and is know running from said syndicate and alliance.

Cody: no last name goes by Viciouse, he is a parlement operative that is being forced back into sevice, family murdered by parlement and is framing cody, sent to take out Fauss for unknown reasons.

Kory: Doctor from Shinon family gets murdered by parlement as well be cause of korys and codys friendship, runs and is know flying with cody.

Danni McCloud: Mechanic, found by Fauss floating in life pod in open space, gennetic reaserch subject (similar to the psychic stuff done to river but didnt affect her mind.) with a fairly colorful history, her grand father is in the parlementry congress.

Mason Bradly: Hacker and former brown coat, steals a Asrev fighter (Firefly episode Message) from alliance cruiser, meets up with Fauss and flys with him

Suporting guys;
Jim Quon the crime king of Boros, has eyes and ears every where. Gives Fauss jobs.

Guy with the big moustach, has no name he likes it that way, he is a black market arms dealer.

Greycoat (Federation) Ships Commander, havent assigned a name to him yet, sugestions? he gives work to Fauss to.

Grandfather McCloud, Dani's grandfather that helps the crew, supports the new independence movement.

And i have new ships:
the Federation Star Blockers, the main cruisers, super masive ships that put the alliance cruisers to shame, block the stars for two miles in any direction.

Wasp fighters, main fighters of the federation, small, quick and packs a punch.

And my favorite the DragonFly, ment to be the browncoats ace in the hole the war ended before it could be utilized, based on the firefly design is faster an more manuverable, has an impressive armement, given to fauss after a discussion with the Greycoat commander.

Now you know what i got please help me. Names and such would be helpful and filler ideas for inbetween main events. Thanks All

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