BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

SLICEANDDICE

Empty room
Saturday, May 6, 2006

sillylittleduck suggested the title of this poem as a title for a poem and it inspired me to write this.


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Couch, TV, and chair,

Nobody there.

Check the bedrooms,

No breath in the air.

Silence all around,

No screams to be heard.

Something on the ground,

Don't want to see it.

Can't get out,

All alone.

Sink to the ground,

See the blood.

Desolve into tears,

Can't make it stop.

Disappear in the solitude,

Bathed in my tears and blood.

COMMENTS

Saturday, May 6, 2006 5:01 PM

WASHBURNEFAN


Ummm... what? Were you Watching a FOX related program, because that's the only time I've ever done that.

Tuesday, May 9, 2006 7:47 AM

RIVERISMYGODDESS


washburnefan makes a very funny point.

Again, you have very good visuals in your work, and in this one they are amplified by the lack of sound in the rooms.

Tuesday, May 9, 2006 7:52 AM

CONSTANCE


I love this one...


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