Dawn smoke by SliceandDice

BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

Dawn smoke
Tuesday, May 9, 2006

another poem, kind of different from the others but more firefly-y

CATEGORY: FILK TIMES READ: 1964 RATING: 8 SERIES: FIREFLY

Cock your gun

Take your shot

Aim again

Shoot to score

Push your hair away

Bag another

Feel the tingle of excitement

Another one bites the dust

Engine roars

Prefect shot

Cock your gun one last time

Out of ammo

Game over

One last shot

COMMENTS

Tuesday, May 9, 2006 7:41 AM

I really like it Slice, and the title is kinda catchy too.

Tuesday, May 9, 2006 7:48 AM

I like your poems slice, and I liked this one too

Tuesday, May 9, 2006 11:38 AM

at first i though it was another verse the the FF theme

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