Forest in the night by SliceandDice

BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

Forest in the night
Tuesday, May 9, 2006

Another poem, more on the love side of life. I like it so.... here it is. there may be a typo.....

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Stars above us,

Sparkling in your eyes

Breeze through the branches,

Twisting wind in your hair

Whisper of the wild life,

The softness of your voice

Glow from the moon,

Beauty of your smile

Vines growing slowly,

Your arms wrapped around me

Movement in the leaves,

Feel of your breath

Gentle scent of the flowers,

Your perfume everywhere

Moss soft beneath our feet, us,

Your body soft against mine

First drops of rain on my cheek,

Second only to the feel of your lips on mine

COMMENTS

Tuesday, May 9, 2006 8:51 AM

Mmmmm I can feel the kisses with the rain, moon and stars are good imagery too.

Tuesday, May 9, 2006 9:00 AM

this was nice, i could see the forest...

Tuesday, May 9, 2006 10:32 AM

nice, this reminds me of an ex boyfriend... in a good way. I like it

Tuesday, May 9, 2006 6:23 PM

there is a typo ('out' feet) in the line forth to the end. Good job though.

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