BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

SLICEANDDICE

Light Seduction
Tuesday, May 9, 2006

Sweatty poem for your enjoyment, thank the firefly chat for its name


CATEGORY: FILK    TIMES READ: 1957    RATING: 10    SERIES: FIREFLY

Light breeze through the curtains

Whispers around the room

Across the desk

In the closet

Over the dresser

Between the sheets

Over the sweat tinged skin

Brings shievers from the sweat

Moves overs the flesh

Goes between the souls

Mingles with the gasps

Spreads out over the room

Dries their sweat laced hair

Lingers on the lips

Disappears in excited lungs

COMMENTS

Wednesday, May 10, 2006 12:33 AM

RIVERISMYGODDESS


Very much an airy/wind type feel to this one. I like it.

Wednesday, May 10, 2006 6:22 PM

SILLYLITTLEDUCK


"lingers on the lips and disappears into excited lungs."

I think this is my favorite poem yet, much less... slit your wrists


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