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HUMBUG

Both Sides: Part 3 (a Jaylee Story)
Tuesday, May 30, 2006

This story is told from both sides of the relationship. Each part is from Jayne or Kaylee’s point-of-view, or both! Other characters pop in and out. Some chapters will be from their point of view.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1975    RATING: 8    SERIES: FIREFLY

Title: Burned Series Title: Both Sides (3 of 18) Author: Humbug Rating: PG Fandom: Firefly Pairing: Jayne/Kaylee Word Count: 297 Summary: Told from both sides of Kaylee and Jayne's relationship Disclaimer: Joss is Boss. I'm just borrowing his characters for fun!! Warning: Jaylee goodness! But other characters can't help joining in.

Authors note: Thanks to bookaddict43 for betaing.

Read the previous chapters posted at my Live Journal.

*********************** Thanks for daring me to write my own Jaylee story, Squish and Bookaddict!

Be gentle! It’s my first fanfic story. It’s told from both sides of the relationship. Each part is from Jayne or Kaylee’s point of view, or both! Other characters pop in and out. Some chapters will be from their point of view. The plot bunny came from the Philosophy_20 prompt tablet #7 both sides. Enjoy! (I hope….) ***********************

Part 3

“Kaylee!” Jayne whispered in her ear, “Where did you just go?”

“I was just thinkin’…,” she said with a smile.

“Well, think about how your hand’s feelin’! Is it easin’? Should I take ya to see the Doc?”

“No! It’s fine, Jayne. It ain’t a bad burn. Ya got my hand under cold water pretty quick and it’s cooled down some. I reckon if ya can get me some burn cream and somethin’ for the pain, I don’t think we need to bother Simon…”

“Well, if ya sure…” Jayne grinned.

So she didn’t need to see the Doc about every scrape and cut and burn any more! When did that all change? She had been so hung up on Simon for so long. It had him climbing the walls, ‘till anytime they got to a friendly planet he sought relief with a willing woman ….. Maybe he had a chance?

He gazed down into her smiling face. How’d she get so brave, still looking so shiny with all the pain she must be feeling?

“Ya wait here. I’ll be right back!”

As he passed his bunk he smiled, and slipped down to grab the blanket his Ma had sent. Kaylee’d be feeling cold after running her hand under the cold water and with the pain of the burn.

He approached the infirmary, checking that the Doc was nowhere to be seen. River stood in the doorway, a strange smile on her face.

“What’cha doing, Moonbrain?”

She handed him a tube of burn cream, some pain-killers, a couple of weaves, a bandage and a towel.

He stared at her. Gorram it! Had she been reading his mind again? Then he thought of Kaylee waiting for him in the kitchen.

“Uh…… Thanks!” Jayne stuttered, and hurried back to Kaylee.

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To be continued

COMMENTS

Tuesday, May 30, 2006 9:10 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Hmm...River helping Jayne out with making it with Kaylee? Having a hard time imagining it for some reason...oh well. Probably cuz River has canonically seemed to want a Silee pairing, rather than Jaylee....

Great stuff so far, Humbug;)

BEB

Wednesday, May 31, 2006 12:06 AM

REENIE


This is a good start. I'm glad you are venturing into fic writing. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

Thursday, June 1, 2006 4:55 AM

HUMBUG


Thanks for all the comments guys!!!
I love shiny feedback.

Happy to hear people are enjoying it. I'll try to make Jayne growl more, anonymous poster!!!

My Jayne - tough exterior, heart of gold, with a real soft spot of Kaylee (just like we saw in the Firefly pilot!!).

Monday, June 5, 2006 1:49 PM

PRICEMERC


Hey! So do I!


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