BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

SLICEANDDICE

Heart pains
Wednesday, August 2, 2006

MY 100TH POEM! flywithmecaptn gave me the name


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Open my door

Made you a home

My home

Made space

Made excusses

Gave you room

Not only in my house

In my heart

You broke both

Caused hurt

Nearly killed me

My home is no more

And my heart is irrepairable

COMMENTS

Wednesday, August 2, 2006 3:56 PM

THECOWBOYFROMHELL


I likes it...its minimalist and cool. and its the inagural 100th poem yay slice!

Thursday, August 3, 2006 1:05 PM

WANMEI


I really don't see what a lot of these poems have to do with the fandom, but that could just be me.

Good work, though it could use a little more depth. I'm sure you'd be brilliant at subjects besides things like this, which other poets have already exhausted.

Keep it up, you're doing a great job and congrats on reaching 100!

Friday, August 4, 2006 2:15 PM

WHIMSICALNBRAINPAN


Hooray slice for reaching 100! I like the poem. I enjoy poety that is succinct yet creative in it's telling. You've got mad writing skills!

Saturday, August 5, 2006 8:12 AM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Wow...100 poems...damn you're prolific;)

And I disagree with Wanmei...think these poems apply if you want them to. I can totally see this one being Mal/Inara-related, even if that wasn't Slice's point:D

BEB

Tuesday, August 8, 2006 1:08 AM

RIVERISMYGODDESS


Congrats on 100 poems, and this one is very good, the pain from being hurt like that is definitely a deep one.


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