BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

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Inara's Song
Thursday, August 24, 2006

I think its about incense smoke...


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Sweet smells of smoke

Weaving in the fibers

Staining everything

Leaving a trail

Exotic taste dancing along

Flowing through the gaps

Filling the spaces it finds

Filling the senses

Erotic heat radiating

Sweet incense

Spreading out

Light perfume

scent of sweat

Smoke mixing with desire

COMMENTS

Thursday, August 24, 2006 6:43 AM

FLYWITHMECAPTN


Perfecto!! As usual...

Friday, August 25, 2006 12:35 AM

RIVERISMYGODDESS


I think it is definitely about incense smoke, and Inara's shuttle is the first thing to come to mind when I read it.

Saturday, August 26, 2006 10:26 AM

ITSAWASH


Baby, this whole thing ROCKS, but it rocks like a lovely ballad, soft and elegant, yet sexy as hell. Straight to the heart Inara, like nobody else could write her. Seen through the eyes of one watching her rooms. Sigh. A lovely longish haiku is how this reads. Thank you for it.

Fave bits, though all is sweet as incense:
Erotic heat radiating
Sweet incense
Spreading out
Light perfume
scent of sweat
Smoke mixing with desire

A TEN baby.

Monday, August 28, 2006 5:17 AM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Beautiful stuff here, Slice:D

BEB


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