BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - DRAMA

LEIASKY

The Prisoner: Day 5/10
Tuesday, September 5, 2006

Simon wonders why they aren't questioning him and Kaylee doesn't think Mal is doing enough to get Simon back.


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It's building slowly for a reason. Mostly because I'm a fan of drama and like to keep people wondering.

The first four 'days' can be found here:

Day 1. Day 2. Day 3. Day 4.

Thanks to Tamsibling for the beta.

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The Prisoner

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- Day 5 -

Simon could feel his strength fading each time they deposited him into the dark cell. He knew several ribs were bruised badly, and he didn’t even want to see the multi-colored bruises that he knew, just by sensitivity to touch, dotted his skin. He was cold and he trembled despite himself.

His fellow prisoner was silent, as he was most of the time when Simon returned from his ‘interrogation’.

Simon felt himself drifting into an uneasy sleep just as the lights in the cell flashed on, blinding him momentarily. He flung his hands up to his eyes to cover them, as the light was so bright it pierced his closed lids.

But no sooner had the lights flashed on, did they disappear and Simon sank back against the wall, exhausted and concerned that he had still not been questioned.

“They will break you before they even begin to question you,” came a soft voice from the corner of the room.

Simon’s head lolled to one side as he regarded his cell-mate in the darkness. “I can’t help them.”

“What do you have that they can possibly want?”

Simon could hear the disbelieving tone in the other man’s voice, and even in the dark, could picture his eyebrows raised and a smirk curling his lips at what the Alliance could possibly want with someone like him.

Simon thought about his answer for a long moment before responding. “Nothing. I literally have nothing.” Nothing in the form of material things. But those, as he had learned over the last year, were not so important. He had his sister, Kaylee, his new family. They were more important than any material thing in the 'verse.

“Doubtful they’d believe you.”

“I’m inclined to agree.” Simon closed his eyes and tried once again to get some rest.

~*~

“Waiting on leads, Kaylee,” Mal said for the hundredth time in the last few days. She’d taken to cornering him all over the ship and she’d done it again, this time in the common room. Except for the occasional meal, it was nearly the only time he saw her. And he needed her at her best, especially when they went back for Simon. She needed to keep her girl at optimum performance. Though he had not doubt that’s where she’d been holed up since Simon had been taken. She always brooded in the engine room.

“You don’t want ‘im back, do you?” she accused, hands on her hips. She wanted to believe what he’d told her. He’d never lied to her, not really. But the more days that passed, the more faith she lost in her Captain. It was unreasonable, and she knew it, but she was scared and hurt and worried and she just couldn’t bring herself to care about anything else.

“Think River wouldn’t slit my neck in my sleep if I so much as thought that?”

Inara, who had been watching this exchange quietly until now, finally felt the need to speak up in Mal’s defense. “Mei mei –” Inara tried to rest her hand on Kaylee’s shoulder but she shrugged it away.

Blinking back angry, humiliating tears, Kaylee snapped, “Even Zoe an’ Jayne are ready to bust some heads. Why are we waitin’ so long?!”

“My plans ain’t exactly ever gone right. We gotta do this right or we aren’t gettin’ him back at all,” Mal said, hoping it would be enough to deter the upset mechanic. He swallowed an angry retort about this being why he didn’t like shipboard relationships. Kaylee had always been a smart, reasonable, young woman, and her thing with the doc had only complicated matters. “We’ve gotta be careful here.”

Kaylee took a deep breath, trying to force her mind to accept what they were telling her. She knew it was the right thing to do, be careful, wait and plan, but it had been so long and she was worried it would be too late. “Bein’ careful’s gonna get Simon killed.”

“Kaylee, you’re being irrational. Mal is doing everything he –“

“It ain’t enough,” she said sadly and left the room, before any of them could see the lone tear that slipped down her cheek.

Mal stared after her, sighing. “It never is.”

TBC

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COMMENTS

Tuesday, September 5, 2006 6:39 AM

ALLIETHORN7


Ouch. Kaylee's ready to rip Mal a new one, and I agree with her. Lao tien yeh, Simon is so screwed right now it ain't funny. You really have a thing for making Simon feel pain, don't you?

-Danny

Tuesday, September 5, 2006 9:34 AM

MAL4PREZ


You're definitely drawing me in about the prisoner - I wish you were posting more! I want to konw whassup!

I feel like this day is a little weak though. I had to read the Mal/Inara/Kaylee section a few times to work it out, and I still can't picture it. I don't know where they are, who's there, etc... there's a few little grammatical things too.

I know, I'm picky. It's only because you're such a good writer and I love you so! :) But short bits are very tricky. Every word is important in setting the scene and the mood - you've got that with Simon, but not so much the scene on Serenity.

Tuesday, September 5, 2006 9:36 AM

KAYNARA


interesting. i still have no idea who the mysery prisoner is. simon thought the voice was familiar, so i'm inclined to say someone from his past. although, the fact that the prisoner hasn't interacted with the guards yet makes me think he only exists in simon's head. or could it be wash? lol. looking forward to more~

Tuesday, September 5, 2006 4:11 PM

BLACKBEANIE


Poor Kaylee, hope she gets him back soon.

Tuesday, September 5, 2006 4:29 PM

SPACEFULLOFOBJECTS


Not sure yet Leia, but I have an idea on who the mystery cellmate is.

Really good stuff you got here.

Waiting on Day 6.

Tuesday, September 5, 2006 6:22 PM

ITSAWASH


“It ain’t enough,” she said sadly and left the room, before any of them could see the lone tear that slipped down her cheek.

Mal stared after her, sighing. “It never is.”~~ Awwww, Leia! Poor Mal. This is so perfect and so sad. Portrays perfectly how our Cap'n can't catch a break, can't ever be quite enough right to get the job done. I hate it, but I know it's the way the 'verse is to this man who's our hero. Sigh.

Nice job from Part 1 to Part 5. How long must I wait for more?

Tuesday, September 5, 2006 11:27 PM

JAYNEISNOTAGIRLSNAME


Come on Kaylee, Mal wants to make sure that he doesn't screw up.
I hope that nothing happens too bad to Simon (although he does need to be toughened up)

Wednesday, September 6, 2006 7:06 AM

RIVERISMYGODDESS


I am thinking that there is another twist in that the other prisoner is just another part of the interrogation, set there to see if he will confess to someone in a similar situation to his. Of course, I am probably way off base with this one.

River slitting Mal's throat in his sleep = wonderful mental image.

Saturday, September 9, 2006 2:20 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Nice to know RIMG and I share similiar thoughts on the nature of Simon's cellmate;)

This was a great chapter, Leiasky! A bit on the short side, and Kaylee's behaviour stayed just on the safe side of being OOC...but I am really enjoying the scenario you've developed here:D

Gotta admit though...Kaylee's got a point going. Planning's all well and good...but they would be at it for ages to get all the angles down. Simon would be dead or a drooling vegetable by then;)

BEB


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