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SHROUDED

Tales From The 'Verse - Kaylee
Wednesday, September 27, 2006

First character description, of our lovely Mechanic. :) Again, part of my Big Damn English Project.


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COMMENTS

Wednesday, September 27, 2006 11:23 AM

TEACHDAIRE


Nice one.
I hate to be pedantic, but the line "Her name’s Kaywinnit Lee Frye, or just Kaylee." actually has 11 beats to it, not 10.

Wednesday, September 27, 2006 3:54 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


And I hate to be picky...but Kaylee/Jewel's hair wasn't red during the series. Probably got that from the red/earth toned environment of Serenity's engine room...but Kaylee/Jewel is a brunette;)

Still...mighty fine poem, Shrouded:D

BEB

Wednesday, September 27, 2006 4:00 PM

SHROUDED


Thanks for that, Teachdaire.

And, you, too, BEB. I changed it to "golden-brown" (since it does have a golden tint to it, just a bit. ;) ).

Saturday, September 30, 2006 1:17 PM

DANNIISUPERNOVA


This was cute! I'm going to hafta read them all now...

Sunday, October 1, 2006 7:36 AM

TPAGE


I figure since the prologue was good, and this is good, I almost don't need to read the rest to know their quality. But I will. Keep up the good work.

Saturday, July 2, 2011 4:39 AM

ANONYMOUSE


Shiny stuff.

Ooh, the thought of Jewel/Kaylee as a redhead...oooooohhhh... :)


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