BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

SLICEANDDICE

Ravors edge
Saturday, October 28, 2006

*stands triumpant over the a Writers Block* yep a new poem


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It doesnt mean a thing

What your feeling for me

Im living on a razor's edge

And its cutting in to me

My blood is as red as any

And all you see is fresh

There is no way to heal

Because You don't know what im feeling

I don't have the strength my self

Im begging for release

Im asking you to give up

To let me go

To slit my wrists for me

Tie the knots

Pull it tight

I don't want to wear this smile

I don't wanna hide my tears

I don't wanna be here

And you can't see it

You're losing

You don't realise you lost

My life is seeping out

My blood is covering up the picture

Death is turning it black

The razors edge is where I live

Not in your light

COMMENTS

Monday, October 30, 2006 6:21 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Wow...that was some powerful stuff, Slice!

Definitely was seeing a Mal/Inara vibe...till the whole wrist slitting thing came up. Cuz personally? I would rail against that kind of emotion being used to describe Mal and Inara's feelings:(

BEB


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