BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

SLICEANDDICE

Father
Thursday, January 4, 2007

Its basically how i feel my relationship with my father is...


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You don't understand

What you put me through

What I do for you

How hard I work for you

How I re-arrange my life for you

That I cry at night for you

That you hurt me

I do everything I can

More than I should

I push and push

Try my hardest

Until I can't

Until I am warn out

Emotionally

Physically

Financally

You don't understand

And you never will

While you live in your world

Demanding me in it

While I can't tell you

That I can't let you in mine

Don't want to try anymore

That I can't live like this

COMMENTS

Sunday, January 7, 2007 3:31 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Wow...that's some beautifully powerful stuff here, Slice. Not even sure how to properly praise you for such a personal piece of poetry...

BEB

Monday, January 8, 2007 8:30 AM

ITSAWASH


Slicie, I hope and hope your father reads this, and, by doing so, reads you and your lovely heart at last. It's a gift with words you have, and this here is one of your best.

Love you, Honey. Keep writing. It's giving some Slice to the 'verse, and it's a goodness.


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