BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

SLICEANDDICE

#25 Embrace
Thursday, January 11, 2007

....4!! FYI it was soooooo hard not to write a graphic sex scene for you guys


CATEGORY: FILK    TIMES READ: 1639    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

Dresses soaked in rain and mud fall before the hearth

As two lovers hold on to each other

Desperate for the others presence

Soft kisses grow harders

Bolder

Moving to explore more

As they slip on to the waiting bed

Beneath the silken sheets

Fevered kisses meet exploring hands

As curves are newly discovered

Sweet whispers echo among the thunder

As they begin to move together

Cautiously

Gently

Exploring each others touch

Body

Afraid to hurt

Or scare

Try to make this rainy eve last

But crying out in bless as passion is finally filled

COMMENTS

Sunday, January 14, 2007 5:10 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Ya know what? Graphic imagery would have totally ruined what you're building here, Slice. The tasteful and restrained visuals you present go a lot farther in helping to create the overarching storyline and character development than some blatant "Wham, bam, thank you ma'am!" descriptor would;)

BEB


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