A Desperate Hope by whitesilence

BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - SUSPENSE

A Desperate Hope
Wednesday, May 2, 2007

The shock of her presence was jarring but the sudden push of foreign emotions into his head sent him reeling. 100 word drabble series with a hint of Rayne, 4 of 7.

CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 2223 RATING: 9 SERIES: FIREFLY

The shock of her presence was jarring but the sudden push of foreign emotions into his head sent him reeling. He was swept away by her horror at the thought of leaving him to his nightmares, the hatred directed at herself for not knowing that they were coming and a desperate hope that he had been able to escape. Images of a girl, running determinedly down a ramp, being forcibly restrained by two strong men, begging them to turn back, broke through the haze in his mind like sunlight through a winter storm.

WhY?

You did not deserve this fate.

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COMMENTS

Sunday, May 6, 2007 8:35 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER

Brilliance.,,,utter and complete brilliance, whitesilence!

:D

BEB

Sunday, May 13, 2007 9:45 PM

AMDOBELL

Oh wow! Why was Jayne left and who held River back from going to his aid? Brilliant stuff. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

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