Finite by whitesilence

BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - SUSPENSE

Finite
Sunday, May 13, 2007

Their numbers seemed endless but were found finite when silence fell and they stood facing each other amid the red. 100 word drabble series with a hint of Rayne, 7 of 7.

CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 2042 RATING: 9 SERIES: FIREFLY

The screams of their brethren drew the other Reavers. Their numbers seemed endless but were found finite when silence fell and they stood facing each other amid the red.

He broke her gaze and saw, not just the dead around them, but the trail he’d left behind. Eyes, clear for only moments, clouded over again and she watched his soul shatter with a force that drove him to his knees.

She couldn’t not know what he wanted when he pushed the gun into her hand.

PlEase!

She closed her eyes.

Inhale.

Exhale.

All she saw was black, just like him.

Previous - Rush of Battle

A/N: Yes, this really is the last one.

COMMENTS

Sunday, May 13, 2007 9:03 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER

Damn it! You can't end there! We gotta know what the frak happened! Cuz leaving off here is all kind of dirty pool, whitesilence!

;D

BEB

Sunday, May 13, 2007 9:52 PM

AMDOBELL

Oh Wow! Fabulous but fatalistic. I keep wanting River to find a way to save Jayne that doesn't mean ending him so that his agony and descent into the hell the Reavers gave him can be halted. Leaves me stunned. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Monday, May 14, 2007 1:17 AM

JAYNESGIRL212

I sit in silnce with only the sound of my heart beating. I am in awe. Well done!

Monday, August 4, 2008 10:57 AM

INSTANTKARMAGIRL

Gah!

Yeah, that's all I can say is Gah!

SOOOOOOOOOooo well done.

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