First -- PG-15 to R by WhosThatGirl

BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - ROMANCE

First -- PG-15 to R
Wednesday, December 19, 2007

Feels like the first time.
Belongs to somebody not me. Blah blah blah, yackety schmackety.
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Tell me you won't run away again - as he kissed her for the first time.

Tell me you're as nervy as I am - as his hands hovered over the buttons to her dress.

Tell me you want this as much as I do - as his lips moved downward from her breasts.

Tell me there won't be any others - as he paused just shy of entering her.

Tell me no other man has made you feel like this - as he felt himself come.

Tell me you won't regret this - as he held her afterwards.

Tell me you love me, so that I don't have to say it first.

COMMENTS

Thursday, December 20, 2007 11:43 AM

CHAOSSERENITY

Love, love, love how you write Mal and Inara.

Tuesday, January 29, 2008 10:35 AM

SBAR

This is so what I expect Mal to say to Inara the first time. Especially the last line. You captured it perfectly.
Peace,
SBar

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