Haiku too by Ankhagogo

BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

Haiku too
Sunday, March 14, 2004

same as last time :)

CATEGORY: FILK TIMES READ: 2733 RATING: 8 SERIES: FIREFLY

Haikus again!

Wanna start trouble?

Threaten, slander, shoot or hurt

Our little Kaylee

Did we get the cash?

Got me an itch needs scratchin'

I need booze and whores

Engine's runnin' smooth

Cap'n's smilin', and Simon

Ain't yet kissed me once

Two by two, hands of

Blue Sun always tracking me

Early helping too

Behind on the rent

And low on cash;maybe he'll

Take it out in trade

COMMENTS

Saturday, May 1, 2004 10:37 AM

I love the third one, especially. There's a nice turn in the last line, unexpected and yet perfectly Kaylee. Good job.

Monday, October 23, 2006 3:59 PM

lol thats funny, lol simon's like my friends nerdy bf who hasnt kissed her once in thier time of being a couple ( 1 year soon)

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