BLUE SUN ROOM FILK

ALLIETHORN7

More verses of the Firefly theme song
Thursday, April 20, 2006

Well, we can all agree, its so GORRAM SHORT!!!! My attempt to fill the gap. Be mercilous if you like (though I'd prefer if you weren't!)


CATEGORY: FILK    TIMES READ: 2183    RATING: 7    SERIES: FIREFLY

Once had a home, now I'll ever roam,

cuz theres no planet that I can call home,

But now we are free, and its all we shall be,

cuz you can't take the sky from me!

Take all I love, leave what I fear,

But I will know when you draw near.

Theres no place I want to be,

cuz I'm still finding my Serenity!

Now theres no place I wont fly,

No place where I can't touch the sky.

Leave it all, I just need me,

And my crew, my family, my Serenity.

I left it all in Serenity,

All I was before I was me.

And now, with her at my side,

I don't need a ship to reach the skies!

COMMENTS

Thursday, April 20, 2006 7:52 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Not a bad little addition, Alliethorn7. Some of the lines don't quite flow the same way the nominal parts of the Ballad dp, but this is still cool:)

BEB

Thursday, April 20, 2006 8:22 PM

WASHBURNEFAN


I loved it, but I agree with BEB, it gets a little choppy.

Friday, April 21, 2006 1:44 AM

REAVERKILLER


it needs to go withthe actual song. i tried to sing your versus but it was a little hard to do that. I had to speed up at places that slowed down.

Saturday, April 22, 2006 6:29 PM

REIGNPHORIA


The right situation is there, but the rythym is somewhat off. That is hard to do without having knowledge in music. :) I like you you wrote it with the feelings of the people in the 'verse though. This would be a great starting point for the final version of the remaining verses of the song.

Saturday, April 22, 2006 10:36 PM

CRUDEN


Good, although, some parts were a little choppy; they didn't flow as well as they might. Some parts I thought were very well written though.


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