River Vid: "Scared" by Steamer

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River Vid: "Scared"

POSTED BY: STEAMER
UPDATED: Tuesday, December 5, 2006 19:09
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Friday, December 1, 2006 3:31 PM

In which River looks to Simon and Mal to help her cope with her fears.

http://www.marimba26.com/Firefly/River.html

Them as already saw this vid have all hailed it as my best one yet. You're more than welcome to your own judgment, but one way or the other, I would LOOOOOVE some feedback.

River grabbed
The gun and
Dropped three
"No power
In the 'verse
Can stop me!"
FIREFLY

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Tuesday, December 5, 2006 6:26 PM

KELAI

I really liked it. The clips you chose worked good, and it really 'flowed' together.

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//breathe today So many lies s w i r l i n g
All A R O U N D You
you're S U F F O C A T I N G
the e m p t y shape in Y O U
s t e a l s your b r e a t h

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Tuesday, December 5, 2006 7:09 PM

SIGMANUNKI

Not bad.

As a constructive critisism, I wouldn't have put the needle scene nor the "River in the box" scene at the end. I would have left the ending with only more "up beat" scenes like all the others that you chose.

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I am on The List. We are The Forsaken and we aim to burn!
"We don't fear the reaper"

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