Ideas for the end of Tash's new vid. by TragicStory

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Ideas for the end of Tash's new vid.

POSTED BY: TRAGICSTORY
UPDATED: Sunday, July 27, 2003 09:42
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Sunday, July 27, 2003 4:17 AM

Right off the bat I would say cut off most of the final guitar riffs at the end. IMHO, I would end it with multiple shots of different Book scenes right next to each other. Perferably with different clothes and emotions. (Kinda like the brady bunch opening, but actually like the ending of an old 60's spy movie that I can't remember the title of)

OR

I like the "Who are you?" questions, but perhaps having different ones?

"are you married?"
(Never married clip)

"have kids?"
(so I can't be a grandpa)

"So who are you?"
(I'm a shepard)

"You're a shepard?"
(Juble: That ain't no shepard)

Ending can be
Mal looking at Saffron scene asking "who are you?"
Sound only of Book saying "Fine or all right or I'll tell you" while camera still on Mal's face.
Jump to Book saying "I'm..." END VIDEO.

RANDOM CRAP WHICH I THINK WILL BE FUN/HELP

Jayne: someday you will have to tell us how come a preacher knows so much about crime.
Book: Its the rules of my order.

I would also try to add somemore scenes where the crew is asking him about his past.

Another tip is in the scenes where the people are talking ontop of the music, I would lower the music volume while they are talking. (If you need to know how to do that, I'll try to explain)

Last but not least, I really like and think what I have seen is great, these are just my suggestions so if you don't use them or think they suck, no problem, but I hope they help you out.

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Sunday, July 27, 2003 5:55 AM

SUCCATASH

Some of you may be wondering what the hell Tragic is talking about. Well, I'm about halfway done a Book music video.

Tragic, I appreciate your suggestions. I do know how to lower the audio when people are talking, but I decided not to do it. There's talking the whole way through, and the volume going up and down constantly started getting on my nerves. I was hoping to make a seamless mix where the music was not so loud and the voices were louder, maybe I need to turn the entire song down in volume, I don't know.

I like the idea of Mal saying "Who are you, what's your middle name" to saffron and making it look like he's asking Book. I'm going to try that.

I'm saving the Early, "He's no shepherd" line for the very end of the video. Other than that, I've got about 2 minutes more to go and I'm running out of Book footage. I haven't used the kneecapping, gun fight scenes from War Stories yet, but other than that, I appreciate all the input anyone has.

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Sunday, July 27, 2003 9:42 AM

GINOBIFFARONI

Great Vid

I think there was some footage of him in Serenitys cockpit, in The Message that might be useable...

Good Luck

" If wishes were Horses, then we'd all be eatting Steak "

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