BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - DRAMA

MORDSITH

Sweet Surrender
Monday, July 10, 2006

Kaylee, Simon. Oh so VERY short piece of drabble. Dark. Written for ff_friday challenge. One shot.


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Title: Sweet Surrender Characters: Kaylee, Simon Pairing: None Rating: pg-13 (to be safe) Words: 208 Challenge: #127 ‘Darkness' Disclaimer: I do not own Warning: Dark, left vauge on purpose

Author's Note: Short and not betaed

It was creeping in, slipping all around her. Kaylee could feel it crawling deep into her bones. She couldn’t sleep because the shadows moved too much. There were whispers all around her, and yet no figures for the voices to be coming from. It was cold inside of her no matter how warm the ship was, no matter how many blankets she piled on herself.

“Kaylee?” a voice asked. She looked up, trying to force a smile, force her façade to the surface. It was a weak attempt and hadn’t worked. She hadn’t really expected it to work. “Kaylee what’s in your hand?”

“I couldn’t sleep,” she whispered. She opened her palm and dropped the empty medicine bottle, the plastic container bouncing on the ground. She could feel the darkness surround her. At least completely enveloped in the black there wouldn’t be shadows that could hurt her. The darkness held her enemies, but it guarded her from them as well.

Simone leaned down and picked up the empty bottle, his eyes going wide. “Kaylee all the pills are gone. Where are all of the pills?”

“I couldn’t sleep,” she whispered again. There was a silent moment between them, Simon’s eyes searching hers for the answers he would never find.

COMMENTS

Monday, July 10, 2006 3:39 PM

MANICGIRAFFE


Ack!

That was bad! Bad!

Monday, July 10, 2006 3:40 PM

MANICGIRAFFE


I mean bad in the "Dear Jesus let Simon be the doctor he's supposed to be" way.

I the angst way it was very, very good.

Monday, July 10, 2006 4:23 PM

MORDSITH


lol you scared me for a minute!

Monday, July 10, 2006 6:26 PM

LEIASKY


Ok, why with the shortness? Do you just like to torture us? meanie!

And what would make Kaylee want to take a whole bottle of pills?

Ahhhh! Flesh this out more and write a sequel?

Tuesday, July 11, 2006 6:35 AM

BLACKBEANIE


Sequel!

Tuesday, July 11, 2006 12:53 PM

TAYEATRA


oooh ouch. Well written but still, ouch!

Wednesday, July 12, 2006 8:05 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Oh yeah...a sequel is definitely needed, if only to explain what exactly drove Kaylee to ODing on sedatives! Early? Losing Wash and Book, and the truth of Miranda? Loss of her birth family? We need answers, Mordsith!

BEB

Wednesday, August 2, 2006 10:37 AM

ZUCHT


You got me hooked. What's next, does she live? does Simon wear black fo rthe rest of his life? Does Mal space everybody in a fit?


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