BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - GENERAL

LITHIUMDOLL

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Thursday, May 27, 2004

River drabble


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1945    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

Acute is the keen edge of a scalpel in a nightmare she can't escape. It's awareness, intelligence, condition and pain. Acute is too many things, but she remembers it's also an angle.

Obtuse is a world that can't speak her language - too busy listening to hear. It's dull, insensitive, blunt and indifferent as it steals her mind, but she knows it's also an angle.

Reflex is a gun. It's quick, thoughtless, necessary and real, and she comprehends it's also an angle.

Three dead men bleed math as she smiles. "No power in the 'verse can stop me."

COMMENTS

Thursday, May 27, 2004 11:20 AM

NEROLI


Wow...just...wow!!

Thursday, May 27, 2004 12:46 PM

AMDOBELL


Very short but beautifully crafted piece on River. I loved it! Kudos, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Friday, May 28, 2004 5:49 PM

TEELABROWN


Very well done! I play River in the RP, and this is wonderful!

Saturday, May 29, 2004 2:50 AM

LITHIUMDOLL


Thank you for the lovely comments :)

Tuesday, June 1, 2004 6:12 PM

NUR


She just did the math. Wonderful.

Monday, June 14, 2004 3:50 PM

DELIA


Very very nice. I'm a fan of short short stories, you do an excellent job of conveying a great deal with (by my count) 98 word. I'm impressed -- well done.

Friday, September 9, 2005 10:38 AM

BELLONA


that's more of that math we've been hearin' so much about...i knew maths was EEEEEEEEEEEEVIL!!!


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