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Serenity Speaking
Thursday, May 8, 2003

A brief poem thingy about Serenity and her her inner thoughts.


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Authors Note: This is my second fic ever. This time I won't drop it and run likeI'm somehow vandalizing the website. It's a poem, so that might be little different, but enjoy and please gimme feedback. Maybe. Please?

I am Someone’s dreams flying I am Someone’s quest for peace undying I am Home to the lost and running I am A metal playground to the cunning I am A dragon when I dream I am More and less than I seem I am A refuge and a sorrow I am The hope and promise of tomorrow

COMMENTS

Thursday, May 8, 2003 9:39 PM

NOOCYTE


I am

Impressed.

Friday, May 9, 2003 5:09 AM

SARAHETC


I am

a little teary.

I expected it to end "very unhappy" or something. Surprised me. Didn't notice the rhyme scheme at all until the last couplet set.

It's a good start.

I am

waiting for the rest.

Friday, July 11, 2003 7:42 PM

THATGIRLISABEL


That was

Shiny!

Ya gotta write more fics. Or poems, or whatever floats your boat. :)


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