chaos by apollo231

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chaos
Saturday, December 23, 2006

first time heres a poem of sorts not sure how well it is but i like it

CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 1809 RATING: 8 SERIES: FIREFLY

Chaos echos through my mind and heart voices not my own crys from the past cant escape the tides of darkness cant find my light to guide me trapped in the past an observer in the present as i am enclosed in darkness the figure emerges and my light begins to shine. and the voices are quite.

COMMENTS

Saturday, December 23, 2006 6:56 PM

APOLLO231

kinda like it though it is mine

Saturday, December 23, 2006 7:07 PM

BORNTOFLY

Kinda like it though it isn't mine!

None too shabby, apollo231. Be nicer if it was longer (wouldn't everything?), but as it is, it's fitting well within itself.

Now I'm off to watch Die Hard, aka The perfect Christmas film.

Wednesday, December 27, 2006 7:08 AM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER

Hmm...spelling could do with a bit of work, but great stuff in any case:D

BEB

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