BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - ROMANCE

MAI

Unwinding
Monday, July 19, 2004

A bit of conversation and fluff for Kaylee and Simon. Please bare with me this is my first fan fic ever! Warning I have atrocious grammar skills feel free to let me know what needs to be corrected.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4138    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

“Simon, are ya in here?” came Kaylee’s voice from the corridor outside River’s bunk. Simon sat at the edge of River’s bed seemingly lost in a day dream. She crossed the room and gently shook his shoulder. “Are ya all right? You wasn’t at dinner and I was starting to . . . ”

“Oh, Kaylee I um . . . I was just . . . Is something wrong? He asked a bit startled.

“No everything is just shiny. I mean no one’s bleedin’ to death or nothin’. She laughed nervously. “I just wanted to bring the two of ya a bit of our feast before it got all gone.” She said handing him warm plates of whatever protein concoction Book had whipped up.

A small smile crept to the edges of Simon’s mouth. “Thank you, that was very thoughtful. It’s just River’s not... It’s been a very challenging day.” He said not wanting to put his burden on her shoulders as well. She’s not a burden, she’s your sister he thought guiltily.

“She’ ain’t no burden Simon.” Kaylee stated as if reading the thoughts from his pained expression. “ And you ain’t no burden either. You’re doing the best ya can for her. I can’t begin to imagine all the worries ya got belted up inside that head a yours, but you are forgettin’ one real important detail.”

“That’s the problem Kaylee. I seem to be missing every important detail. I can’t cure her. I can’t even make her nightmares go away.” He said miserably. “This is the first time in nearly a week that she has slept soundly for more than 2 or 3 hours at a time.” He sighed, leaning over to tuck the blankets more firmly around River as she curled up into her dreams.

“Simon, that’s my point.” she said sitting down beside him. “You’re always gonna have worries about River. What you’re forgettin’ is you don’t have ta worry alone. You know your both part of the crew now and more than that your part of our family. River has lot’s a people lookin’ out for her. And I don’t have to remind you she’s done a pretty good job a lookin’ out for all of us too.”

“Family, huh? I hardly think everyone see’s River as just a sweet, more than slightly crazy little sister.”

“Sure they do Simon. River is the crazy little sister and you’re the uptight over protective older brother.” She said trying to suppress her laughter.

“Uptight? You think I am uptight? Well I have never been so insulted in all of my life.” Simon laughed in mock disbelief.

“Its so nice to see that handsome smile again.” Kaylee said shifting so she could lay her hand on his.

“Would an uptight person do this?” He asked curling his fingers around hers and slowly moving within a breaths distance from her lips.

“Actions have consequences and the dark wont’ keep” came a whispered voice startling Simon and Kaylee apart nearly landing both of them in a heap on the floor. “I’m not asleep” River said disentangling herself from the warmth of her blanket.

“River oh, I... We didn’t know that... We were just ... “ Simon stammered.

“Fornicating” River stated with disgust.

“Well not just yet.” Kaylee said blushing. “Sorry we didn’t mean to wake ya.” She apologized as River hoisted herself from the bed and turned towards the door.

“So I guess that completes the highly embarrassing portion of my day.” Simon said still seated on the floor. “Kaylee, I’m sorry I didn’t mean to... well I did mean to I just got a little ahead of myself. I didn’t think.”

“Ain’t nothing for you to be sorry ‘bout Simon.” she said standing up gracefully. “I won’t be apologizing for that kiss anytime soon. You could do with a little less thinkin’ sometimes. Matter of fact I think River had a grand idea.”

“You mean you want to be with me?” he asked a bit incredulously.

“‘Course I do Simon. Fornication or not, I want to be with you. Who knows maybe we can even unwind ya a bit. Unless you’d rather just sit there on the rug contemplatin' all them uptight thoughts you seem so fond of holding on to.

"Well, if you think your up to the challenge of getting me unwound..., but first your going to have to help me up." he said grabbing for her hand.

"Oh all right. I suppose it's the least I can do being that you.... ahhhhhh Simon!" She screamed as he pulled her down onto his lap.

"Oops. Guess we will just have to start the unwindin' from here." he said brushing his lips against hers to recreate their interrupted almost kiss.

COMMENTS

Monday, July 19, 2004 6:15 PM

SERENITYSMYBOAT


very good for your first . bravo!

Tuesday, July 20, 2004 9:22 AM

AMDOBELL


I did have to chuckle at River piping up and letting them know she wasn't asleep before they could get very far. Very well written and well done, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Tuesday, July 20, 2004 10:49 AM

MAI


Thank you everyone for your kind help and comments. Your feedback means a lot to me.

Wednesday, July 21, 2004 7:15 AM

GUILDSISTER


Nice. You created a lovely, vivid scene that felt quite true to the characters. Good bits of descriptive narrative amidst the dialog--good choice of words and phrasing.

You could use lots more commas, though, and some grammatical editing. That doesn't reflect on your writing (which is quite nice), just the technical reading clarity--maybe you could find someone to edit (beta) your works to help with that sort of thing.

Keep on! Good work. Love to see some more of your writing.

Monday, January 24, 2005 7:00 PM

KAYSKY


What can I say...I love the mushy Simon/Kaylee stuff. =o)

Keep up the good work!

Thursday, June 2, 2005 7:23 AM

FIGHTON4GOD


Whoo, Simon finally says something right! Gorram miracle! Shiny writing, mai. Loved the comments of River and Kaylee about, "Fornicating." and "Well, not just yet." Got me a little laugh out of that one. Keep up the good work!

Keep Flyin' Under the Radar!
Anna

Tuesday, September 13, 2005 7:49 AM

BELLONA


sweet

Saturday, October 15, 2011 10:13 PM

SHINYZOEKAYLEE


One of THE best Simon/Kaylee fics ever!! :D so dang cute, and you really captured the characters perfectly!!! :D write some more shininess? Please? ;D

Saturday, October 15, 2011 10:13 PM

SHINYZOEKAYLEE


One of THE best Simon/Kaylee fics ever!! :D so dang cute, and you really captured the characters perfectly!!! :D write some more shininess? Please? ;D


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