BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - ROMANCE

WHOSTHATGIRL

Breathing Space
Friday, March 23, 2007

Belongs to somebody not me. Blah blah blah, yackety schmackety. Please to comment. Good. Bad. Whatever.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2004    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

Very first words out of River's mouth when he slid into the copilot seat next to her. and Mal knew he was humped.

"Why are you here? Should be with her."

No need to ask who 'her' was.

"I...uhhh...figgured she needed some breathing room. Time to herself."

River made a face which could only be interpreted as Mal being a complete idiot about something so obvious.

"You already gave her that. For two years."

"Well, mebbeso she needs some more."

"Not what she wants. Not what you want."

"And just how would you know what I want, little one?"

Another look, which Mal found even more creepifying, as it generally signified that she knew what he'd been thinking.

"Want to kiss her. And then undress..."

"Gah! Enough of that!"

River just shrugged and went back to plotting their new course.

"She wants the same thing, you know. Kissing and undressing..."

Mal couldn't help himself. "Uhhmmm, really?"

"Less space, more breathing."

COMMENTS

Saturday, March 24, 2007 3:44 AM

AMDOBELL


Loved this. Now Mal needs to act on his.. breathing. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Saturday, March 24, 2007 9:53 AM

LITTLEALBATROSS29


I agree. Mal needs to act or before he looses her.

Saturday, March 24, 2007 10:02 AM

TAMSIBLING


LOL - less space, more breathing!

God, I LOVE bratty River - bravo!

Saturday, March 24, 2007 11:10 AM

PHYRELIGHT


Oh, I love that last line! It sounds like something River would say about Mal and Inara.

Saturday, March 24, 2007 1:04 PM

EMPIREX


Hehe! Oh River! With all her crazyness, she really is the voice of reason at times. This one gave me a nice little chuckle.

Saturday, March 24, 2007 4:58 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


From the mouth of a babe...in more ways than one;D

Definitely highly ironic to have that kind of solid advice come from River, WhosThatGirl...but also utterly brilliant, if only for the humorous shock value;)

BEB


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