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Straying off the Path of Righteousness
Sunday, May 20, 2007

Mal is trapped!


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Straying off the Path of Righteousness Word Count: 319 per Word Rating: PG-13 – nudity mentioned. Author’s Note: For luxuria_oceanus who kept nagging me to write, apckrfan whose writing is so making me go to the Special Hell too, and just_slummin who is just plain amazing. Summary: Mal is trapped! Disclaimer: The great, almighty and powerful Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy, etc. own the universe and characters. I'm just playing with them. Please don’t’ take away my shiny toys Captain. Copyright (c) May 2007 Patricia Flynn

* * * * * * * * * * Mal was trapped and the walls of his bunk were shrinking in on him and only one obstacle lay between him and the freedom offered by the hatch. She terrified him. More than Reavers, Niska, Zoe, the Operative, or an entire regiment of purple bellies combined. Oh, he'd led her a merry chase and to have avoided her this long was nothing short of a miracle, but what little luck he had, had obviously just run out. "Checkmate." She whispered. Mal flinched before saying. "This so not right, lil' one. 'Sides, I reckon your brother would have loads to say on the subject." "Not wrong. What you want, what I want. Simon knows. Knows I always get what I want. I'm bratty that way." Mal gulped nervously as she began stalking him, removing her dress to reveal the nakedness underneath. Averting his eyes to the sight of her pert breasts and flawless expanse of skin, he began mumbling under his breath. "Goin' to hell. The Special Hell. So going to that Special Hell..." Mal yearned to give in when he felt her cool hand slide into his hair and begin tugging his head down. Instead he stiffened and held himself away from those lips that tempted him during the day with special, secret smiles just for him and haunted his dreams, doing things he dared not allow himself to remember in the harsh light of the day. When a small hand settled over his throbbing erection in his pants, his eyes flew up to see her face inches from his own. He saw his downfall in her eyes. "Pride goeth before the fall." She whispered. "Aw hell, I was always a fan of sin." Mal said as he kissed her. If he was going to the Special Hell, he was gonna make damn sure they both enjoyed the sin that sent him there.

COMMENTS

Sunday, May 20, 2007 11:48 PM

AMDOBELL


Poor Mal, he really didn't stand a chance. And who can blame River? Special Hell or not there is bound to be hell to pay when Simon finds out. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Monday, May 21, 2007 10:15 AM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


And I would lay down good money as a bet that Joss & co. would have done something rather similar had they wanted to and been given a chance. Mal was screwed from the first moment River knew she wanted Mal;)

BEB


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