Comic - page 5 by ichiban

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ICHIBAN

Comic - page 5
Saturday, June 9, 2007

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CATEGORY: GRAPHICS TIMES READ: 1350 RATING: 9 SERIES: FIREFLY

COMMENTS

Saturday, June 9, 2007 5:43 PM

KAYNA

I like your line work. Great expressions, especially with River. The heads seem a bit large though. Can't wait to see were this goes.

Saturday, June 9, 2007 7:09 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER

Some great work here, ichiban! Definitely can't wait to see more:D

BEB

Sunday, June 10, 2007 4:38 AM

THEHEROOFWILLIAMTOWN

Damn fine job matey. I envy you comic skills you been at this long?.

Sunday, June 10, 2007 5:32 AM

ICHIBAN

This is going down better than I expected. Thanks for all the nice comments.
Kanya - youre right, the heads are a bit too large. Once I've finished a page I see all the many things that are wrong with it:).
I'm working on paper that's probably a little too small and I'm struggling with likenesses - I think that might have something to do with the dodgy proportions, but then my grasp of anatomy isn't that great:)

Monday, June 11, 2007 8:51 AM

WYNTER

Great dialogue in this page, short but true to character.

Tuesday, June 12, 2007 9:52 AM

RANDOMELEMENT

Yay someone likes my dialog! from here on though Ichiban takes over the dialog.

Friday, June 15, 2007 1:40 AM

FIZZIX

Ichiban, those proportions are what I like. Dunno why, but they're that much more expressive that way.

Sunday, June 17, 2007 7:26 AM

CRUDEN

a tip- it helps to find proportions and stuff on the internet that illustrate how to pencil the body. Then draw out the page, step back, and if all is well, ink it 0_^

Tuesday, June 19, 2007 8:37 PM

DREADPIRATE

I love the stylized drawings, the representations of the crew... good stuff!