I'm near him by khambilo

BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - ROMANCE

KHAMBILO

I'm near him
Thursday, March 5, 2009

this is a parallel fic/poem to "She's near me", Inara's POV on the same situation.

CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 2273 RATING: 7 SERIES: FIREFLY

I was slipping, I told Kaylee

But in reality, I was falling

Falling down that steep slope you can’t possibly

Climb back up

I hate him for pushing me this far

For making me have to choose

Between him and everything else

Could I possible live his life?

Could he live in mine?

Most definitely not

I’m near him now

And I don’t care

He needs to know

He needs to know why I’ve deflected him

For so long

Why I’ve flaunted my job in his face

Because I know it irked him

He needs to know that

I’ve hated him for so long,

I just want to love him

COMMENTS

Thursday, March 5, 2009 3:25 PM

ADMIRALIRONWING

Again, that's pretty good

Thursday, March 5, 2009 10:01 PM

ANOTHERSKY

I agree. This is good, not in what it specifically says but what the lines together imply. Mal's also, and the style fits both of them.

*Adopts Kaylee voice* "And awww, you've even got them right next to each other. [the fic poems]How sweet."

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