The shortest fanfic story ever by SimonWho

BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - GENERAL

SIMONWHO

The shortest fanfic story ever
Wednesday, May 18, 2005

This is a tribute to Augusto Monteroso and an enormous boon to those who hate long, long fan fiction.

CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 4056 RATING: 9 SERIES: FIREFLY

When Wash woke up, the dinosaur was still there.

COMMENTS

Wednesday, May 18, 2005 3:39 AM

MANWITHPEZ

That's awesome!!! The imagery you paint and what word choices!!!

Actually, I do like this quite a bit.

Wednesday, May 18, 2005 4:47 AM

SOULOFSERENITY

Wow! How heart-wrenching!! I laughed, I cried! Please tell me you've got a sequal planned?

- Soul

Wednesday, May 18, 2005 5:13 AM

HAWK

Cliff hanger endings are cruel.

At least I think that's a cliff hanger.

Wednesday, May 18, 2005 7:02 AM

THATWEIRDGIRL

Brill!

Wednesday, May 18, 2005 7:31 AM

PHAEDRA

Oh my God!! You've done it. Finally the great American Novel! Oh except I think you're a brit. Damn you limey bastards showing us up again;)

Wednesday, May 18, 2005 8:22 AM

STEVETHEPIRATE

I've been wasting all this time on character exposition in my fanfics, and this guy comes along and makes a better one in less than 10 words? I may never write again ...

Wednesday, May 18, 2005 9:50 AM

SIMONWHO

Do you work for the Reader's Digest or something? Where's the drama and plot development without the comma?

Honestly, some people would have had Michelangelo do the Sistine Chapel in a weekend with two layers of Apricot White.

;)

Wednesday, May 18, 2005 10:09 AM

CALLMESERENITY

I think it's great. When will it be published? Will you sign my copy?

Wednesday, May 18, 2005 2:12 PM

FLYFIRE5

I just want to know if there is going to be a TV series again?

I hate when I find a really good show and it gets canceled. Like Firefly and Dead Last.
I would even say that (to me) Firefly is up there with M*A*S*H* and 3rd Rock. The writing is quick and witty.

=)

Thursday, May 19, 2005 2:16 AM

KIZZIECSTARS

my god, its perfect. the characterisation, the structure, great. shiny.

Thursday, May 19, 2005 5:23 AM

ERINGILES

OMG!! Brilliant... but I have so many questions... so many unresolved answers. Why was the dinosaur there in the first place? Why was Wash asleep? Did the dinosaur make him do it?! What was IT?!

Will you be at the next convention so I can badger you all day about your great secret sucess in your work?!

Thursday, May 19, 2005 10:22 AM

RIVERNOT

Love it. Actually read it yesterday, but it keeps popping back into my brain.

Keep the comma. It's just a sentence without it.

Thursday, May 19, 2005 7:18 PM

CASTIRONJACK

Why not give it a ten?

What clarity of thought... Conciseness of vision...

Perfection of phrase...

Keep flyin'

Monday, August 15, 2005 10:02 AM

BELLONA

dear god, it's truly amazing... shakespeare himself couldn't have done better. I - I'm lost for words, the beauty, the intricacy. I never would have seen it coming. Never. Joss, I hope you're taking notes.

Tuesday, November 8, 2005 8:40 PM

HOBANIWASHBURNE

I'm just discovering this now. Classic! Too freaking funny!!!

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