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The Death of Wash
Friday, November 4, 2005

Wash's last moments.


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With my head turned to the side, I never saw it coming. The window shattered. My seat jostled. Something large, heavy, and black protruded from my chest. The moment was so instantaneous I never had time to react; nor did I have time to feel any pain. My internal organs shut down. My heart stopped pumping. My brain reeled as the blood no longer flowed.

They say earring is the last thing to go. I knew something was wrong then, when the only thing I could do was listen. My wife’s beautiful panicked voice filled my ears as she called out my name. I wanted to comfort her. I wanted to move and get out of this seat. It tormented me to be so helpless amidst such danger. But even her voice began to fade. And that’s when I saw the light.

What a light it was—so pure and boundless. It came from above and pulled me away from my body. As I looked back, I saw with breathtaking clarity and detail the result of my adventure. The Captain pulled my wife away, and together they disappeared from the cockpit. By now, my torment and confusion was gone. I relaxed into the light and was absorbed. I no longer had any questions. I felt like I knew everything. I no longer sensed pain or danger. There was only love. No need to weep for me, I thought—the light becoming brighter and brighter. We will be seeing each other soon enough; because the sky stretches farther than we ever thought. And nothing will ever take that away from us.

((Wrote this in 30minutes. Sorry, was pressed for time.))

COMMENTS

Friday, November 4, 2005 11:57 AM

BELACGOD


"the sky stretches farther than we ever thought. And nothing will ever take that away from us."

I want this on a t-shirt.

Friday, November 4, 2005 12:01 PM

EIEN


I want that on a shirt too!. How beautiful

Friday, November 4, 2005 1:00 PM

BELLONA


hello, kleenex?

b

Friday, November 4, 2005 1:36 PM

GROUNDED


Spoiler much?

Friday, November 4, 2005 3:00 PM

AMDOBELL


Loved this - sniff - still miss Wash. This was beautifully written and gave a feeling of hope too. Nicely done! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Friday, November 4, 2005 4:20 PM

TRANQUILITY


VERY nice! Kinda how i imagined it. If you look on wash's face when zoe calls his name, his eyebrow furrows just a little bit, then he falls over. Nice meshing with the movie!

Saturday, November 12, 2005 2:37 PM

OLDTRANSU


Sniffles

Tuesday, November 29, 2011 5:24 PM

IWANTOMARRYWASH


annnnd now im crying "thanks alot buddy ":) i loved it want a shirt pleeze :) <3


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