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The Shiny Affair of Mr. Pink - Mini-Update
Wednesday, December 14, 2005

A little baby post because I feel so darn bad for not posting for so long. (Sorry about that, by the way. Finals. Small nervous breakdown. You know.)


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Jayne hated waitin’. Made ‘im feel useless. Made ‘im… think too much.

“Fifty-four. Fifty-five.” The words were little more th’n grunts on the up-side of his push-ups.

He’d been doin’ a lot’ve waitin’ lately.

Waitin’ fer Kaylee. Waitin’ fer plans ta start. Waitin’ fer… Kaylee.

He could feel her lips on his ear again. Feel the weight of ‘er pressed against ‘im.

“Sixty. Sixty-one.”

Feel ‘er hands. Her tongue.

Why had he ruttin’ stopped ‘er?

He knew why he’d stopped ‘er. But it didn’t stop ‘im from bein’ real surprised he actually had.

“Sixty-five.”

He was sick’ve waitin’ and sick’ve walkin’ away.

Man’s got needs, after all.

But… gorramit. When’d he get too proud ta give in ta all-mighty temptation?

“Zeek! You all fit to go whorin’?”

Jayne tuned the comm out. Wasn’t done yet.

Sixty-eight. Sixty-nine.

“Hey!”

Seventy. Not bad.

Jayne rolled onta his back an’ stretched his arms over his head. “Yup.”

“Good. You’re leaving.”

“Do I get ta change my shirt first?” He sat up an’ glared at the comm.

“You’re leaving.”

Jayne looked down at the v of sweat on the front of his t-shirt. Reckoned there was a bigger one on the back.

He shot the comm another look an’ got up. Opened his drawer real quiet-like an’ found a half-decent shirt. Pulled the Fightin’ Fairies one off as he was goin’ up the ladder an’ let it drop. He had the new shirt over his head an arms an was halfway out the hatch when Kaylee came outa hers.

She glanced over at ‘im, then away. Then back again real slow.

Jayne pulled his shirt down the rest of the way.

Kaylee looked up at his face. She was blushin’.

She hurried the rest of the way outa her hatch an’ hurried down the passage outa sight.

Jayne smiled an’ let the butterflies in his stomach dance a while.

COMMENTS

Wednesday, December 14, 2005 3:51 PM

LILKRISTY


Glad to see you haven't forgotten this! Hope finals went well and you did great.

"She glanced over at ‘im, then away. Then back again real slow."

Yea, I'd take a real slow look too.

Wednesday, December 14, 2005 3:55 PM

RINNYPJ


Awwwwwwwww!!! Yes, Jayne. Let the Butterflies dance!

And take all the time you need, sweets.

Friday, December 16, 2005 1:19 PM

HUMBUG


Thanks, Beautifool! Thank was shiny!!! ;)
Jayne and Kaylee just seem to fit together so well, and I love the tension between the two in your story.

Hope your exams are going okay.

Keep up the good work (both scholastically and in the firefly universe!)

Saturday, December 17, 2005 12:06 PM

BELLONA


Jayne smiled an’ let the butterflies in his stomach dance a while.
think the butterflies want to cut the rug with my warm fuzzies?

b


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