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The Shiny Affair of Mr. Pink - mini update
Tuesday, December 20, 2005

it's just a little fluffy update, but it was so darn cute i just had to share.


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1973    RATING: 9    SERIES: FIREFLY

She was so beautiful when she slept. She was beautiful all the time. Still beautiful when she slept.

Kaylee was curled up on ‘er side, her back ta Jayne’s gun rack. Jayne was on his side, facin’ her. He hadn’t slept. They’d stayed up until the little hours—not doin’ anythin’, really, ‘cept talkin’ an’ kissin’. Jayne reckoned he’d really been missin’ out on all that kissin’ over the years an’ Kaylee seemed real happy ta oblige.

Kaylee eventually fell asleep. Jayne tried, but he kept openin’ his eyes every five minutes ta look at ‘er. Gave up, eventually.

Her eyelids flickered. She smiled.

“You watchin’ me sleep?”

Jayne smiled. “No.”

She opened her eyes. “Liar.”

She stretched her arms over her head like a cat. Kinda took Jayne’s breath away.

She scooted toward ‘im. He opened his arms for ‘er an’ she slipped right between ‘em ta cuddle up against ‘is chest.

She let out a little sigh. “I missed you.”

Jayne closed ‘is eyes an’ rested his chin on top of her head. “Mm?”

“While I was sleepin’.” She slipped ‘er arm around his waist an’ slid her hand up his shirt in the back. Slid her hand along his spine. “Kept dreamin’ about you, but it wasn’t good enough.”

Jayne smiled again. Kaylee pulled away a little ta look up at ‘im. He opened his eyes.

She was smilin’. He tipped his head down’ an’ kissed ‘er, real soft. Funny, how it still made his heart jump like the first time.

She made a happy little noise an’ smiled at ‘im again when he pulled away.

Jayne rolled onta his back, pullin’ Kaylee with ‘im. She was so little against ‘im. Hardly seemed ta weigh anythin’. She sighed again an’ put her head in the curve of his neck.

“This is nice.”

Jayne slid his hand up an’ down her back an’ closed his eyes again. He was sleepy now. Happy-sleepy. Well-fed-puppy-sleepy. “Glad you think so.”

She was quiet, just layin’ there against ‘im. Felt real comfortable ta have her there. Felt… right.

Jayne started driftin’ off ta sleep.

“Jayne?”

“Mm?”

Kaylee buried her face in his neck. Her voice was hardly above a whisper. “I think I have a crush on you.”

Jayne smiled. Dreamed real happy dreams.

COMMENTS

Tuesday, December 20, 2005 8:05 AM

HUMBUG


Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!! Lovely!!

I really enjoy this sort of soppy romantic fluff. I think I like it better than the explicit sexy stuff. Thanks, beautifool!

Bless!! Kaylee and Jayne are so cute together.

Jayne & Kaylee, sittin' in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G!!! Squeeeee!!

Tuesday, December 20, 2005 11:58 AM

RINNYPJ


SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

what a wonderful middle of the workday soft and squishy-ness! Cheered me right up. I love just.... SO MUCH. I can't even say.

Tuesday, December 20, 2005 3:36 PM

LILKRISTY


Awww, they're twitter-pated!

::pets the sweet::

Tuesday, December 20, 2005 10:41 PM

CANTONHEROINE


Sleepy-puppy Jayne is so cute and cuddly.
*grabs pen, writes* Dear Santa...

Wednesday, December 21, 2005 8:01 PM

BOOKADDICT


Cute & cuddly, just right for today.

Friday, December 23, 2005 12:58 PM

BELLONA


“I think I have a crush on you.”

join the club girlie, we got jackets...

b

Saturday, February 11, 2006 7:40 PM

VENA


There are jackets? I have a crush on Jayne JACKETS!?!
No one ever tells me these things.
Why does no one ever tell me these things?


The fluff was first rate. Nice job!


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