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A Jayne Fic Part 5- Girl gets taught how to 'play nice'
Thursday, December 29, 2005

Ok I don't think it's all that *intense* but it's hardly for kiddies to be readin' This is shorter, and it's really only a filler, I got to thinkin about how much I miss my fiancee, and all the fun we used to have, in all of it's forms- he used to love tickling me, and I miss that- but don't let me ever admit that to him.


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A Jayne Fic Part 5- Girl gets taught how to 'play nice' Abbey stood at the doorway, looking into Jayne's bunk. He was dozing with his hands resting behind his head, it was warm on the ship so a sheet covered his waist, leaving his torso exposed. She'd just been to see Simon in the infirmary, Jayne had given her scratches on her back that needed disinfecting. She was now in the mood for some payback.

Kaylee tapped her lightly on the shoulder and handed her the capture. Both girls smothered laughter as Abbey adjusted the capture for the best shot. With the flash and whir that it made Jayne's eyes shot open, seeing the two girls standing there, brazenly laughing with capture in hand he let out a low growl. "Kaylee you take this- he won't chase you." Abbey said through the laughter.

"Who says I won't chase lil Kaylee- she has the gorram thing." Jayne stood up as Kaylee turned and ran, letting the sheet fall to the floor he moved towards the doorway. "You won't chase her- it was all my idea." Abbey stood there grinning, more like a predator than prey. "Oh, it was? Well that does it." He grabbed her by the waist, before she even had a chance to run hauling her inside his bunk. Jayne's fingers sought out her ribs, making her double over once again in shrieks of laughter. It was right there, clutching her stomach that Abbey realised the tables had turned the hunter was now the hunted, and all because Jayne knew her one real weakness. She needed to admit defeat. "No, Jayne- stop! No I'm sorry. Please!"

She could barely speak through the laughing fit, let alone breathe. That was when he paused. "Breathe girl," he watched her almost as if saying 'you aren't getting out of it that quickly. When she'd started to breathe evenly again he pushed her onto the mattress. "What you thought you'd get out of it that easily?" He whispered roughly in her ear, Abbey shivered at the tingling sensation along her spine . "That wasn't a nice trick Abbey- you sneaking up on me like that, and then having lil Kaylee run off with the evidence." He used his weight to pin her to the mattress, grinding his pelvis into hers, grinning as she tried to raise her hips to meet him. "I'm tryin to teach ya ta play nice Abbey." He kissed her gently, pulling away just when she tried to deepen it. "Simon told me to play nicely, those scratches need time to heal." He smiled, moving a hand from where he held her to rest on her upper-thigh. "Who said I was gonna scratch you again?" Jayne licked his lips and before she knew what was happening he was biting down on her neck. Moaning she arched her back trying to get closer to him.

Then Jayne was up and on his feet, reaching for a clean shirt. "Maybe this'll teach ya to wake me up in a nicer way next time." He winked at her, and doing up his belt he left, chuckling.

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Thursday, December 29, 2005 11:00 AM

SYZG


*gasp*

whatta man...love the revenge ;)


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