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Counting Perfection
Tuesday, April 11, 2006

Written for FF_Friday challenge 113 - numbers Angsty Drabble.


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Title: Counting Perfection By 2x2 Rating: PG Spoilers: None Word Count: 137 Author's Note: I don't know where this came from. I was in a very strange mood, full of dark images.

She touches his hand, wraps the tiny fingers around her own. Counts the digits, five perfect little fingers, twenty-seven bones, carpals, metacarpals and phalanges. His other hand is the same in its mirrored perfection.

Two hands, ten fingers. Two arms, two legs, ten perfect little toes, ten little piggies waiting to go to market.

She traces a finger down the sole of a foot so small it fits in the palm of one hand.

Two eyes, blue, blue, blue eyes.

Two ears. One nose. One mouth. One heart.

She counts the perfection in her arms. All these numbers are right, they all add up to the flawless child they have created.

She wants to stop counting there, but other numbers come, unwanted.

Twelve heartbeats. Five little breaths. One weak cry…One long, terrible, droning alarm.

Two lives, shattered.

COMMENTS

Tuesday, April 11, 2006 11:15 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Yeah...what's going on? Is it Zoe holding a child by Wash (though unless Zoe's got some blue-eyed relative in her family tree, the usual cliche of a son having blue eyes is kinda impossible)? Kaylee holding a child by any of the remaining mn on Serenity (cuz I ain't being close-minded here)? Or is Inara or River losing a child by one of the guys?

We have to know more!

BEB

Wednesday, April 12, 2006 7:31 AM

ALLIETHORN7


I think that this could be River holding Simon and Kaylees baby-blue,blue, blue eyes, remember? It would be just like River to count the number of bones...wait...shattered lives...are Simon and Kaylee... dead!!!!!??????!!!!!!???????(etc...)

Wednesday, April 12, 2006 10:42 AM

TAYEATRA


I'm with Kaynara on this one and if she's right... you may just have had a fairly successful go at breaking my heart.

Wednesday, April 12, 2006 11:35 AM

2X2


Well... it can be anyone *you* choose it to be...

but let's just say, if you know my OTP, it's not too hard to figure out who *I* think it is ;o)

*hint* Taya and Kaynara know what I'm talkin' about *G*


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