Look at Me by anjulie

BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - ROMANCE

Look at Me
Monday, April 17, 2006

Drabbles written for prompt: look at me One inference to sex (or a good foot massage.) Very sappy - tooth decay even. M/I Cross-posted to mal_inara

CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 3198 RATING: 9 SERIES: FIREFLY

“Look at me!” he shouted.

“Mal, please!” she snapped, so close to slapping him that she had to hold her arm rigid.

“Please what, darlin'?”

Please stop making this harder than it has to be. Please see that this will never work. Please don't let me go.

*~*

“Look at me,” he whispered.

“Mal, please,” she whimpered, so close to the edge of ecstasy that she didn’t know where she ended and he began.

“Please what, darlin'?”

Please go faster. Please slow down. Please don’t ever stop.

*~*

“Look at me,” he urged.

“Mal, please,” she gasped, so close to panic, so frightened at giving up everything that she’d worked for all her life that she couldn’t begin to fathom the choice she'd just made.

“Please what, darlin'?”

Please help me make this work. Please keep holding me. Please don’t ever die on me.

*~*

“Look at me,” he soothed.

“Mal, please,” she sniffed, so close to being overcome with joy that she could only grasp his hand and weep tears of happiness while she smiled at the small, squirming bundles they placed on her chest.

“Please what, darlin'?”

Please tell me they have all their fingers and toes. Please tell me they have your eyes. Please don’t stop reminding me that you were right all along, that everything we'd need to be happy we'd have - right here on Serenity.

COMMENTS

Monday, April 17, 2006 8:14 AM

CAPERCAILLIE

my goodness....please...please what?....please write more like this - what fun!

Caper

Monday, April 17, 2006 9:59 AM

PLATONIST

Stayed with me from Live Journal.

Don't comment often... No time!

Captured characters well....(Mal living moment to moment and Inara on Pause)

Always a pleasure to read "creative drabble" amoung the narratives

Monday, April 17, 2006 2:06 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER

Short, sweet and quite good with looking at the various aspects of Mal & Inara's relationship if it is allowed to flourish in certain ways. And it's amazing how simple emphasis and emotion can change how something is interpreted drastically;)

BEB

Tuesday, April 18, 2006 9:41 AM

ANJULIE

So if I write out the formula for this would anyone like to add one? Cause I think it would make a great snapshot Round Robin and I would love to see what you guys would write. As long as it doesn't make me cry. I hate to cry!

Tuesday, April 18, 2006 9:43 AM

ANJULIE

Oh, and thank you all for the warm words about the drabble. Feedback is so shiny.

Tuesday, April 18, 2006 2:53 PM

MORWEN112

Yes, quite teeth rotting. But I never listened to the dentists anyway. ;)

Very nice!

Morwen

Wednesday, April 19, 2006 9:02 AM

CAPERCAILLIE

I just keep re-reading this one. I really like the structure and the sweetness. Thanks!

Wednesday, April 19, 2006 7:31 PM

ANJULIE

I like the structure too. It's like a mad lib. Very fun to write. Feel free to add one.

Wednesday, June 28, 2006 7:00 AM

BELLONA

i hear dentures aren't SO bad...

b

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