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An enemy in need
Thursday, April 20, 2006

A mission to raise a little money ..


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Scene 1

"..money" Jayne stops polishing his gun and looks up, "Money" he echoes. "Aren't these the same people who were in the process of burning River and I at the stake" the Doctor interrupts. Jayne puts down his gun, "How much money" he says. "Enough to to get us the the regulator for the enviromental?" asks Kaylee. "Not having to put up with badly recyled air works for me" replies Wash.

The Captain flicks the viewer on and points to two planets. "It's a two day trip, pays 40,000, all in advance". "I'm in" says Jayne "What's the catch" says Zoe. The Captain rings a black gap on the chart, "The area 1462 has been designated a possible protoneutron event". The room erupts. The Shepherd's voice cuts across the room "People will die if the medicine isn't transported" he says. "Likely us" replies Jayne returning to his gun. "Saw what was left of a ship been warped by a protoneutron once" said Wash, "Still gives me the creeps" "We could just take the money and leave" says Jayne. Kaylee hits hims. "What?" he replies. "So its decided" says the Captain, "we leave right away". "Shiny" mutters River.

COMMENTS

Thursday, April 20, 2006 2:55 PM

BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER


Interesting start you have here.

Initial intro of the mission's good but could use more....fleshing out. Curious to know where Inara is (she doesn't say anything remarked on here). And Jiangyin's in range of neutron star or something? Lovely;)

BEB

Thursday, April 20, 2006 8:30 PM

AMDOBELL


So they take the money and run? That doesn't sound like something the Captain would do even if it would be the best outcome for him and his crew. But then playing Russian roulette with a protneutron event is so far from smart it doesn't have a zip code. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

Thursday, June 29, 2006 7:13 AM

BELLONA


so, there's lots of money involved, a strong possibility they'll die while earning said money, and jayne wants to cut and run. just another day onboard the good ship serenity!!!

b


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