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Not So Shiny (round 2)
Thursday, April 27, 2006

K, so firstly read 'Not so Shiny' then read this, add em together and gimme suggestions... This story is dying. My brilliant muse is dying and only suggestions and reviews will ever revive him. Please help!


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Simon had complete confidence in the captain. Well, almost complete. However, Simon was worried and very bad at hiding it.

"Look, you were worried, I acted. What's the problem?" Mal sounded both amused and incredulous.

"Okay, but he's mad, right?" Simon's eyes were wide. "We shouldn’t provoke him I mean coming back is not likely the best option. What if he called the Feds? They'll get us when we arrive."

Mal just rolled his eyes. "If he called the Feds he'd be dead too. He's really not that dumb." Simon could think of no retort, so Mal continued. "This is why we don't take orders from you. I'll settle it. Leave it be." He lifted his chin in the direction of the door. Simon took the hint and headed toward it.

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Wednesday, May 17, 2006 10:26 AM

SILLYLITTLEDUCK


is that it? four lines? i'm supposed to be contended with four tiny lines?

*furrows brow menecingly*


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