BLUE SUN ROOM FAN FICTION - GENERAL

ALLIETHORN7

Mal
Tuesday, May 2, 2006

Okay... so I have MAJOR writers block, so sue me. All I can get my head 'round are poems at the mo'... I'll just write this, 'till I can get back to my series... enjoy, the title says it all


CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2020    RATING: 8    SERIES: FIREFLY

Once away, now I must stay, E'er searching for my Serenity. I lost a war and found a home, Set in the black where I'll e'er roam. Got life, got love, almost but not quite, Got a crew, but I can't convince you just to hear me out. I saw it all, the dead bodies charred, Now everyone can see me scarred. Clutching my tomb, I'm locked in my room, I'm tearing me apart again. I don't want to be the one, enbattled always, through Sunlight and shadow, I've seen alot of the two. I don't know why I'm fighting here, I don't know whats to be done. Lost and found, lost in the woods, I am a lost one. My wounds just will not heal, This pain I bear is all too real, Theres things I've borne that time will not erase. I've lied to you, after all you've seen me through, Letting you do, like I always go through, Letting you walk away from me. I fought a war and found a home, But I still fight now, its tearing me in two! Came as a Companion, stayed as her friend, It came down to me, and I made it end. And she cried, and I could not wipe away all her tears, I could not fight away all of her fears, And I still hurt... for you. And I try to tell myself that your gone, but though you're not with me, I've been alone, so alone! ***

Um... questions? Comments? Concerns? Please review, it makes feel so fulfilled

COMMENTS

Tuesday, May 2, 2006 1:04 PM

RIPTHEJACKER


Alright, just a few questions....

"I saw it all, the dead bodies charred"
Is he reflecting on the movie Serenity? Or are you figuratively speaking?

and at the end is he talking bout Inara or Serenity?

I really like the poem, it explains Mal very well.

Wednesday, May 3, 2006 1:51 PM

LEIASKY


Hmm, sounds like he's mourning Inara leaving Serenity.

Thursday, May 4, 2006 5:05 PM

BROWNCOAT2006


thant indeedie do... another thing I noticed is it's kinda Lynkin Park-esq in some of the ryhms and the delivery... not a bad thing... I likes me my Lynkin Park :) sertin ryhms poped out at me and made me think of a few of their songs :)

Saturday, July 8, 2006 6:21 AM

BELLONA


the last two lines remind me of evanescence's 'my immortal'. it's good though, works with the rest of the poem.

b


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