sex by jeraxus

BLUE SUN ROOM

sex

POSTED BY: JERAXUS
UPDATED: Tuesday, March 6, 2007 18:39
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Thursday, February 22, 2007 11:10 PM

JERAXUS

Hardcore pornis their a limit to what you can post in the blue sun room?

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Thursday, February 22, 2007 11:23 PM

SPACEANJL

Rate it and warn people in the summary. Not everyone wants to read that sort of thing. But otherwise, knock yourself out. Or whatever. (PWP is porn without plot, but it would be nice if it actually had some semblance of a storyline.)

Now wash your hands.

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Friday, February 23, 2007 12:38 AM

PEULSAR5

We sniff the air, we don't kiss the dirt.

It's going to be interesting to see how many people read this based on the thread title alone.

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Friday, February 23, 2007 1:28 AM

JADEHAND

Quote:
Originally posted by SpaceAnJL:
Now wash your hands.

I. Now Wash your Hands
You give up hope
You settle down
With your favourite soap

Now wash your hands
???

"But you sleep like a ghost with me
It's as simple as that
So tell me I'm mad
Roll me up and breathe me in
Come to my madness
My opium den
Come to my madness
Make sense of it again."
-Marillion -Goodbye to all that III the Opium Den -Brave
http://www.marillion.com/music/lyrics/brave.htm#goodbye

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Friday, February 23, 2007 10:15 AM

LEIASKY

The ratings go all the way up to NC-17 so as long as a fic is appropriately rated, I'm sure there isn't a problem.

It's always nice to mention rating (I prefer pairing as well but some don't care) somewhere before the story begins so those who don't read higher rated stuff can bypass it.

"A government is a body of people usually notably ungoverned."

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Friday, February 23, 2007 10:59 AM

DERANGEDMILK

No offense but this thread did not live up to it's title.
-e

"Storms getting worse."
"We'll pass through it soon enough."

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Saturday, February 24, 2007 3:19 PM

EMPIREX

Quote:
Originally posted by derangedmilk:
No offense but this thread did not live up to it's title.
-e

Haha! That's brilliant!

I found this page on one of my old X-Files links. It's kinda funny, discusses rating fanfic. Thought it might be of some interest...

http://web.archive.org/web/20060209073023/http://fic101.angelq.net/

Just click on the NC-17 link to the left under Fic Categories.

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Sunday, February 25, 2007 10:50 PM

JERAXUS

River licked his face and rubbed against him sensualy - he knew it was wrong but couldnt stop himself he entered her forcefully she moans in ecstacy as wave after wave of orgasm tears through her panting he cums deep inside her hard and fast.
it cant go along like this one of the other crew members will discover them sometime - its already hard enough dealing with Kaylee.
Simon looks down at his sister wet with perspiration and thinks 'i love my sister'

play with the best die like the rest

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Monday, February 26, 2007 6:42 PM

EMPIREX

Quote:
Originally posted by jeraxus:
River licked his face and rubbed against him sensualy - he knew it was wrong but couldnt stop himself he entered her forcefully she moans in ecstacy as wave after wave of orgasm tears through her panting he cums deep inside her hard and fast.
it cant go along like this one of the other crew members will discover them sometime - its already hard enough dealing with Kaylee.
Simon looks down at his sister wet with perspiration and thinks 'i love my sister'

play with the best die like the rest

Dude - absolutely, under NO CIRCUMSTANCE should you spell "comes" as "cums". It makes people cringe. Really.
Now I'm in no way a River/Simon 'shipper, but the sex scene seems a little out of character for Simon. He's not a brute. He's a gentleman. He'd make love to a woman (River included), not "enter her forcefully". JMO.

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Tuesday, February 27, 2007 12:51 AM

JERAXUS

i wrote that for darranged milk who thought the thread didnt live up to expectations - so can you do a short sex scene thats better?

play with the best die like the rest

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Tuesday, February 27, 2007 8:40 AM

EMPIREX

Quote:
Originally posted by jeraxus:
i wrote that for darranged milk who thought the thread didnt live up to expectations - so can you do a short sex scene thats better?

Oh God! I thought you were posting a snippet of a Simon/River fic you were writing! OK, I get it, now. You were being facetious. Sorry. Sarcasm doesn't come across very well on the internet. My bad.

But... was that an issued challenge?!? Why don't we spice this thread up a little more, shall we? I challenge everyone to post a smutty little snippet fresh from your own dirty little brains. Deranged Milk won't know what to do with him/herself!

Here's mine. (Run away, kiddies. It's NC-17.)

Mal's skilled and sturdy hands guided her, turning her onto her belly, bringing her up onto her knees. His fingers gripped her hips and she moaned as he pushed in, deeper than deep, bottoming out, making her back arch and curve as she struggled to discern whether it was pleasure or pain that was winding her up, tightening her body like a coil.

"Christ, 'Nara..." His breathless words and relentless strokes were an answer her uncertainty. She trembled at the raw sound of his body against hers, the sharp slap of wet skin against wet skin, punctuated by their sounds of pleasure. Her body suddenly dissolved in a shattering of pure bliss that was so startling she was unsure it had happened until after it had finished. She slid downwards onto her stomach, her eyes closed and her limbs utterly exhausted. He went with her, his arms wrapped tight around her waist, desperate now, thrusting, a creature hard and reckless. One of his hands moved down, his fingers spreading her open, stroking frantically.

"Oh, I can't... I can’t…" Her voice was hoarse and muffled in the sheets, her throat dry and parched. He must not have heard her, or if he did, he chose to ignore it. But even as she protested, she found that she could… she was. Her body was igniting, causing her to shudder violently, soft grunts being knocked out of her in quick succession as her body rippled around him. She felt his body turn to stone, tensing, tensing. His breath had turned to a harsh, ragged gasp, and she could feel the beating of his heart against her back, like a caged animal, frantic for escape.

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Tuesday, February 27, 2007 8:50 AM

DRAGOS

I was not really offended by this post but I had to mention that brothers and sisters should not have sex.

Jack MacReady: It's obvious the bastard's got lyme disease!
Bill Pardy: What?
Jack MacReady: Lyme disease. You touch some deer feces, and then you... eat a sandwich without washin' your hands. You got your lyme disease!
Bill Pardy: And that makes you look like a squid?

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Wednesday, February 28, 2007 1:45 AM

JERAXUS

people might start thinking im fixated on River but Rivlee sounds like a good idea

Kaylee was tired she dropped to the floor of her cabin and crawled into bed feeling the warmth of her lover River Tam they snuggled together pulling each others clothes aside snogging with the ergency of a couple of sex mad tarts who want an orgasm well Kaylee definetly – they basked in the afterglow River resting her head on kaylees breasts

Play with the best die like the rest

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Thursday, March 1, 2007 5:52 PM

STINKINGROSE

Quote:
Originally posted by derangedmilk:
No offense but this thread did not live up to it's title.
-e

"Storms getting worse."
"We'll pass through it soon enough."

Vote for Firefly at http://richlabonte.net/tvvote/index.html

The subject of the title does not live up to the title sometimes either...

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Thursday, March 1, 2007 5:55 PM

STINKINGROSE

Please beta your smut.
I am twitching.
Not in the fun way either.

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Thursday, March 1, 2007 6:00 PM

DERANGEDMILK

my god....what have i done....
-e

"Storms getting worse."
"We'll pass through it soon enough."

Vote for Firefly at http://richlabonte.net/tvvote/index.html

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Thursday, March 1, 2007 6:17 PM

EMPIREX

I don't understand what some people have against periods. And commas, for that matter. They're so small. Don't take up much space, really. See? . ,
The former-English-major in me cringes when I see stuff like that. What is happening to our school system? Maybe I shouldn't have abandoned English for Anthropology. If I could keep one poor child from writing a run-on sentence, my life would have purpose...

But then, I always hated diagraming sentences.

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Tuesday, March 6, 2007 12:34 PM

KAYNARA

Hey, that was really good! You should post as a story. And, um, finish it. ;)

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Tuesday, March 6, 2007 6:39 PM

EMPIREX

*Gasp!* *Thud* Oh. My. God. Did that just happen? Did one of my all-time favorite fic writers just pay me a compliment!?! I feel like I just won... well, I don't know what, but something really, REALLY cool. I'm totally cheesin' right now.

I'm actually plotting out a fic I've been thinking on for forever. It's a Mal/Inara fic, but also K/S, W/Z, River/OC and Jayne/OC - post series, but then AU (no movie - I want Wash and Book in this). It spans a good number of years, so it's gonna be long. Probably not a smart move on my part, what with this being my first fic, but I can't get it out of my head and we must do as the Muse commands, right? Anyway, I plan to delve into Inara's background. Where she comes from and why she clings so fiercely to her vocation and shies away from Mal and romantic love. Also plan to tackle Mal - his being "an emotional basket-case" as someone pointed out in another thread. LOL. River is going to get some attention as well.

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