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POSTED BY: LEELU777
UPDATED: Wednesday, April 20, 2005 19:47
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Wednesday, April 20, 2005 7:34 PM

hi me again just wanted help for writing a fanfic,
honestly I dont know how to put detail in the story or punctation.
I have a semi good story and would like to atleast try.

men are in lust women are in passion

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Wednesday, April 20, 2005 7:37 PM

STARRBABY

What you are looking for is called a beta. They pre read your work and give you helpful crit.
I'm not the best beta in the world. I am decent at the grammatical aspect, but I have trouble telling people how to make their stories better otherwise.
If you can't find a beta that can help you with both parts, I'd be glad to help you with the grammer and whatnot.

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Wednesday, April 20, 2005 7:47 PM

THEGREYJEDI

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