GENERAL DISCUSSIONS

Faolin's Crew

POSTED BY: JOHNTHETHEATREFREAK
UPDATED: Thursday, June 8, 2006 16:18
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Sunday, June 4, 2006 2:03 PM

JOHNTHETHEATREFREAK


sorry river and GREAT DRAWING ALMOST EXACTLY AS I PICTURED IT

The Captain stepped in the galley and sat at the table. Shanti was smiling again and that made me happy. He noticed they were alone and felt okay saying this

"I know you were used your whole life but you strike me as someone who could be a great leader I would really like you to take this position. Whether you take it or not I'm the only one on this boat you call sir understand and I don't know if I'm reading what your relationship with Darren is becoming but I think you should go for it if that's what you want. You deserve it"

The captain smiled at Shanti. She seemed suprised to see him smile. "Now what's your plan"

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Sunday, June 4, 2006 2:17 PM

13


Banner walks in, scratching his head with a spatula that was lying on the ground.

"Yeah, plan...that's uhhh...good, yeah."

Thinking to himself: Oh go-se, the Captain know I been sleeping this 'ole while?

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13, First Mate of the 'Heart of Haven'
and Honorary Forsaken

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Sunday, June 4, 2006 3:49 PM

SAMEERTIA


Shanti thinks about the Captain's words for a long moment. She's not used to saying anything other than sir, or miss, or master. Banner's entrance distracts her from her thoughts.

Shanti cringed when she saw Banner rubbing his hair with a spatula! "Mr. Banner, Si..." She caught herself trying to say 'sir' again. Lords, this free woman thing was harder than she thought! "Errr., Ummm Could you maybe drop that in the autowasher, please?"

She reminded herself to run the dishes through an extra sanitizer cycle after dinner.

Taking the Captain's cue, she slid the schematics in front of herself and pointed to them. "I don't know if we've got the manpower, sir, but it seems to me that the best thing is to get two people through the front door, here."

"Now, most banks have their safety deposit boxes here in the outer vault, so getting there isn't the problem. Once there, we'd need to kidnap a staff member, force them to open the inner vault."

She taps thoughtfully at the maintenance shaft. "This comes right up under the main vault floor, I assume it's got some kind of airshaft entry into the vault, in case someone gets locked in or something."

Shanti waits until everyone nods agreement, and notices that Banner has dropped the spatula onto the counter, not in the autowasher.

"The shaft comes out here, right next to this shuttle dock. I would say, all we need is to get some of us to come into the shuttle dock, come through the maintenance shaft and meet whoever goes in through the front door."

She looks seriously at Mononoke, "Do you think you can tap into their cameras? Somehow make it look like we're still in the outer vault?"

Mononoke looks startled, but reaches for the schematics to see for herself.


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Sunday, June 4, 2006 4:04 PM

DRPAIN


Darren walks into the galley and sees mostly everyone at the table looking at something. He walks over to the sink with his mostly picked clean plate and puts it in along with the utensils and the glass.

He says to everyone "So what are ya guys and gals lookin' at and discussin'?"

Captain Faolin speaks up "We're going over the schematics for the job."

"Oh ok then." Darren replies while taking a seat next to Shanti. He continues to say "Is there anything I can do on this job or should I just stay onboard?"

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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?

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Sunday, June 4, 2006 5:00 PM

JOHNTHETHEATREFREAK


No we need all the help we can get. Gail and I will do the front door part Banner will do the kidnapping, quietly. Darren help Mononoke with the camera and Puro and Shanti be ready to pick us all up.

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Sunday, June 4, 2006 5:05 PM

SAMEERTIA


"Errr, Captain, sir?" Shanti is still looking at the schematics. "Don't you think it would a be a tad less suspicious if you and I go through the front door? Pose as newlyweds opening a safe-deposit box together, or something?"

She glances over at Gail's glare, "'cause pardon me for saying, sir, but I'm afraid Gail doesn't look like the sort of gentleman who banks at Blue Sun Federal Bank."


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Sunday, June 4, 2006 5:08 PM

DRPAIN


Darren replies "Will do Cap'n."

Darren gets up and sits next to Mononoke, smiles and says to her "Well then I guess you'll have ta fill me in on what I'm ta do."

Darren chuckles at Shanti's remark about Gail as Mononoke fills him in.
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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?

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Monday, June 5, 2006 2:47 AM

JOHNTHETHEATREFREAK


Good point Shanti. Gail you help Puro

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Monday, June 5, 2006 5:11 AM

PAGANPAUL


Doc Luap (loo-app) walks into the galley, and pours himself a cup of strong black coffee. He's a lot steadier than the last time he was there, but still looking like hell warmed over.

LUAP: So how can I help out on this job?

He walks over to where Shanti has the schematic laid out, and pretends to study it. As he leans over, he whispers to Shanti:

LUAP: Come to the medbay later, and I'll see what I can do about removing that tattoo.

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Sorry about being silent, but I was away from my 'puter for the weekend. I'm back now.


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流口水的婊子和猴子的 笨儿子。
Liou coe shway duh biao-tze huh hoe-tze duh bun ur-tze.
"Stupid son of a drooling whore and a monkey."

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Monday, June 5, 2006 5:29 AM

SAMEERTIA


She nods imperceptably to the doctor. Might be a good time to mention her other problem then as well.

"We'll need to disguise one of the shuttles as a standard courier." Shanti crinkles her brow as she picks at her food. She had put too much on her plate again. "Probably need some kind of fake courier license or something."

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Monday, June 5, 2006 7:00 AM

RIVER26


*mononoke overheard shanti and felt bad about making her remember slavery*

mononoke(under her breath)sorry.

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Monday, June 5, 2006 7:13 AM

RIVER26


*the fact was mononoke too had bad memorys; she
was trangshi-the worst of bad luck!


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Monday, June 5, 2006 9:05 AM

PAGANPAUL


LUAP: Getting into the bank shouldn't be a problem. I've still got a legitimate account at Blue Sun Federal. There's not a lot of coinage in it, but it still exists. Unfortunately, I don't think I can be of any help with the courier problem...

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流口水的婊子和猴子的 笨儿子。
Liou coe shway duh biao-tze huh hoe-tze duh bun ur-tze.
"Stupid son of a drooling whore and a monkey."

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Monday, June 5, 2006 9:07 AM

PAGANPAUL


Damn double posts!

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流口水的婊子和猴子的 笨儿子。
Liou coe shway duh biao-tze huh hoe-tze duh bun ur-tze.
"Stupid son of a drooling whore and a monkey."

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Monday, June 5, 2006 10:00 AM

SAMEERTIA


Shanti looked around the table, somewhat surprised. Mononoke was quiet, a sad expression on her face, deep in thought, but the others were all discussing the plan, adding their input.

She couldn't help expressing her surprise out loud. "So, you all really think it would work?"


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Monday, June 5, 2006 10:47 AM

PAGANPAUL


LUAP: Well, sure'n it should! I'm no criminal master-mind of course, but it's a sound plan. The only hitch in it I can see is obtaining a courier license, but that shouldn't be too hard for someone here to forge, right Mononoke? I understand you tutored under Mr. Universe for a while, and should be able to make a passable forgery, remove security cameras, and confuse guard patroles, right? After that it should be simple enough to get our fake courier shuttle into the shuttle dock, and just fly off with all that money.

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流口水的婊子和猴子的 笨儿子。
Liou coe shway duh biao-tze huh hoe-tze duh bun ur-tze.
"Stupid son of a drooling whore and a monkey."

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Monday, June 5, 2006 11:18 AM

DRPAIN


Darren sat at the table listening to everyone talk. He hadn't said much but didn't need to. He knew his role in the plan and went over it in his head.

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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?

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Monday, June 5, 2006 11:59 AM

13


Davies scratches his head, trying to sort through the plan. His lips move soundlessly, and he seems to be ticking off numbers with his fingers. He gives up, and sits resignedly at the table.

"Part for me in this, look big, or wot? Cause, I been hungering 'somein to do 'ere, since that.."

"Nothin'. Sorry."

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13, First Mate of the 'Heart of Haven'
and Honorary Forsaken

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Monday, June 5, 2006 12:09 PM

SAMEERTIA


"We'll need you to come in with the shuttle and join us in the inner vault through the maintenance shaft." Shanti looks to the Captain for his approval before continuing. "If you can make sure we have a clear route back the shuttle, then the rest is just knees work."



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Monday, June 5, 2006 5:05 PM

JOHNTHETHEATREFREAK


The Captain was smiling as he sat with Puro in the bridge the plan was set. Shanti was getting more confident and his crew was about to pull off the biggest hitch of there life. He looked at Puro and couldn't help feeling sad. Puro reminded him of River, didn't know why but he did. maybe it was the quiet as if always in thought. Who knows. Was is right of him to leave Serenity I mean his friends were...

"Captain"

"Yes Puro"

"We're her"

The captain pressed the button to activate the com "Show time"

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Monday, June 5, 2006 5:49 PM

SAMEERTIA


In her room, Shanti slaps together the last of her disguise and glances in the cracked mirror over the sink.
Not too shabby. She looks like a respectable, core-world professional woman.



She only hopes Mononoke got that courier license, otherwise, the shuttle team would have a hard time getting to where they need to be.

With the additions to her purse that she'd borrowed from Darren, she thought she was just about ready... with one exception, and it was one of the hardest things to do.

She heads back into the galley and finds Captain Faolin. She ignores his surprise at her appearance, recognizing it as a "well done!"

"Captain, sir, seeing as you and I are going in the front door, I was wondering..." She hesitates, "Am I going to need a weapon?"


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Monday, June 5, 2006 8:21 PM

CHOO1701


Question: Where do you guys get the personal pictures from? They look preatty cool

"Remember, always be yourself. Unless you suck."-Joss Whedon

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Monday, June 5, 2006 8:34 PM

DRPAIN


Darren was in the engine room as always, mentally going over the plan, when he was faced with some nagging questions.

Would he be carrying a weapon?

Would they search him for one?

Would he have to disquise himself?

Darren got up from his chair and headed for the galley to talk with the Captain.

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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?

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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 2:40 AM

PAGANPAUL


Quote:

Originally posted by Choo1701:
Question: Where do you guys get the personal pictures from?


Quote:

Originally posted by SameErtia:
I make all my characters at http://www.elouai.com doll makers.



Dr. Nagap Luap
(say: Nah-gapp Loo-app)

This is just my Yahoo! mail avatar, but it actually does look a whole hell of a lot like me. I even gave him a Browncoat!

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流口水的婊子和猴子的 笨儿子。
Liou coe shway duh biao-tze huh hoe-tze duh bun ur-tze.
"Stupid son of a drooling whore and a monkey."

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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 2:56 AM

PAGANPAUL


Doc Luap didn't know if his services would be needed once this job was over, but looking around at the crew, he wasn't terribly impressed. Half of them seemed to have no idea what their part in the plan entailed, and the other half... Well, some of them seemed as if they were not the sharpest pencils in the set.

The plan itself was good, he felt. Basic, simple, get in and get out. The simpler they kept it the less there was to go wrong. Now the only thing left to chance was the Human Error factor.

Which of these simpletons is gonna botch it up? he thought to himself. Or perhaps, which will botch it up first?

He smiled and nodded to them as they passed him on their way to the shuttle hatch, and said nothing.

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流口水的婊子和猴子的 笨儿子。
Liou coe shway duh biao-tze huh hoe-tze duh bun ur-tze.
"Stupid son of a drooling whore and a monkey."

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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 2:58 AM

JOHNTHETHEATREFREAK


Only Shanti and I will disguise ourselves of of course you nr\eed a firearm the captain ws wearing a respectable shirt and respectable pants. He turned to Mononoke. You got that liscense.


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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 6:00 AM

SAMEERTIA


Shanti takes a deep breath to answer, but Banner is already shoving a pistol into her hand.

"Yah jest squeeze here, darlin. 14 rounds in the clip, one in the chamber."


"I ...errr.." She looks uncertainly at the gun, then holds it up, pointing it at the wall and sighting down it. The captain is busy making sure everyone knows their job, so she just tucks it into her purse, along with the laser cutter, and the pliers. "Right then. Let's rob a bank!"

"Banner, you and Gail are coming up from the ventilation shaft. Doc, Darren, we'll need you in the shuttle."

Shanti glances at Darrens watch. "We should be in the outter vault in thirty minutes. Another ten to get the attendant to let us into the central vault. That give you two forty minutes to get into the maintenance shaft. Once we're in the vault, we'll cut through to the shaft for you."





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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 7:37 AM

PAGANPAUL


I've got to drop out of this. Sorry, but I just don't have the time to dedicate to doing justice to this story. I'm also incredibly sick of composing, foreshadowing, writing dialog, etc. for 20 minutes, just to have the server crash on me and loose my posts over and over again! It’s just more frustration than I’m willing to deal with right now.

If someone else wants to take over the Doc's part, here's his deep, dark secret...

Select to view spoiler:


Oooooppppps! Too late now! You should have read this part before I erased it.


I'll stop in from time to time just to see how the story is progressing. Have fun! Keep it shiny!


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流口水的婊子和猴子的 笨儿子。
Liou coe shway duh biao-tze huh hoe-tze duh bun ur-tze.
"Stupid son of a drooling whore and a monkey."

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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 7:49 AM

DRPAIN


Darren was glad he didn't have to dress up. He was also glad that he'd be packing a weapon since he already had his .45 shoved in the back of his waistband.

He said to Shanti "Alrighty then Shanti. We'll be ready and waitin'."

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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?

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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 8:11 AM

SAMEERTIA


Oh, Paul, wish you didn't have to go! I know the server crashes are getting to me, too. I've taken to writing everything in notepad and then copy & pasting. Your character is fascinating, and I love the background you put together. :( Please come back!

Shanti enters the shuttle with the Captain. The crew would drop them at a public lot a few blocks from the bank. "We'll be on video from the moment we enter the bank. I sure hope Mononoke gets the cameras straightened out!"

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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 10:50 AM

CHOO1701


Quote:

Hello to Faolins crew from the crew of the good ship "Queen Bee".

Hope everythings going well with your life in the Black. Just got this message through from an old buddy. Seems he had some marrige problems:

Quote:

TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN.

I GIVE YOU WARNING OF A CON ARTIST/COMPANION WHO SEEMS TO BE "MARRYING" HERSELF OF TO ANY MAN SHE CAN FIND. AFTER THAT SHE KNOCKS YOU OUT AND PLUNDERS YOU FOR ALL YOUR WEALTH, LEAVING YOU DEAD IN THE WATER.

BE WARNED, SHE IS DANGEROUS.



So there you have it, be careful who you marry guys . Gotta go, the captains just brought this preatty little blonde women on board...

Good Luck

Choo



"Remember, always be yourself. Unless you suck."-Joss Whedon

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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 12:33 PM

JOHNTHETHEATREFREAK


Paul your character was awesome sorry you have to go. I resisted the urge to read you backstory. Be back to post soon (In my plans this heist goes off without a hitch or so they think... basically if you post don't make them run into trouble the trouble comes later)

johnttf

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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 2:30 PM

13


(OoC: Wow. The doctor did WHAT!?? Jesus, that was a freaking powerful twist! I'd take the character over, but I can't handle much more than 13 the Cyborg and Davies Banner the Backbirth. I'll work in some Luap, though.)

Davies continues to go over the plan in his head.

"Alright, so I'm with Gail, an' then Oi..oh Chroist...Okay, just follow Gail, ye'll be fine."

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13, First Mate of the 'Heart of Haven'
and Honorary Forsaken

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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 2:37 PM

DRPAIN


Darren runs his hands trough his shaggy hair. He hopes noone gets seriously hurt, well except for maybe Gail. Darren takes out his .45 pistol, ejects the magazine, checks to make sure it's loaded, carefully slides the magazine back in, and says to himself while staring at the gun in his hands "I hope I don't have ta use this on anyone."

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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?

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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 4:42 PM

JOHNTHETHEATREFREAK


The Captain and Shanti sat in the shuttle.

Captain looked over at her. "So was I right about you and Darren." She didn't answer.

"The Doctor seems odd" she finally said.

"Some stuff has happened to him. I can feel it.

They arrived at the bank and walked through the front door. They approched the desk and worked their charm. m They were in

johnttf

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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 4:47 PM

SAMEERTIA


*giggles* " cept maybe for Gail" *giggles*

I'll keep the good Doctor live and rolling for a bit, because Shanti needs him to further her exposition.
Where are our other authors?


Shanti follows the Captain out into the bustling street. She's been to core planets before, but never as a free woman. Suddenly, everything seems very bright and shiny. Women walking by catch her attention, and she finds herself studying their styles; what they wear, how their hair looks, how they stand, and how they speak to each other as they peer into shop windows.

She sees one stand straight and scan the busy street, preparing to hail a hover-cab, and tries to emulate her stance and demeanor.

The reinforced concrete structure rises up before them and she reaches out and takes the Captain's arm, ready to play the happy bride. Not so far from her usual role when visiting the core, she thinks bitterly, but manages to plaster a happy smile on her face as they pass the first guard.

The Captain punches Dr. Luap's access code into the keypad and the door opens for them.

So far, so good.


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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 5:10 PM

DRPAIN


Bwaaahahahahaha

Darren heard the Captain over the shuttles com "We're in you guys know what to do."

Darren clicks the com button and says "Yes sir Captain."

He turns to Mononoke and says "Let's get ta work on those cameras. Shall we?"

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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?

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Tuesday, June 6, 2006 5:26 PM

SAMEERTIA


where the heck is everybody?


Shanti pulls the gun and points it at the bank manager as Captain Faolin grabs her from behind. "Now, just stay nice and calm, and nobody comes to trouble, dong ma?"

The woman nods frantically, and Shanti grabs her hands pulling them from her sides and checking for emergency beacon devices. "All right, now just open the inner vault, nice and calm like."

"You won't get away with this." The woman hisses, and Shanti can't help but grin.

"I've heard those words before, and guess what?" Shanti leans close, feeling reckless, "I got away with it."

"Lovely chat, ladies." The Captain glances at the cameras, hoping Mononoke got them taken care of, "Now open the VAULT!"

Inside, they turn and seal it behind them, the woman's eyes growing wide, "NO! That autolocks! Nobody else is on shift who can open it! We'll be trapped!"

Shanti smiles politely as the Captain, as gently as possible, hits the woman in the back of the head, knocking her out cold.

"We're in." He transmits to the crew, and Shanti pulls out the laser cutter and finds the spot where the diagram showed the maintenance shaft.


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Thursday, June 8, 2006 6:51 AM

DRPAIN


I'm here...I think.

Darren was glad that Mononoke was successful with the cameras. When he heard the Captain over the com say "We're in." Darren got up from his seat and said to everyone

"Alright it's show time. Let's get ta the maintenance shaft."

Darren tucked his pistol back into his waistband and pulled his shirt over it, as everyone who had a job to do went to do it.

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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?

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Thursday, June 8, 2006 8:04 AM

SAMEERTIA


Shanti cuts through the floor, hissing at the sparks from the hot metal. "Captain, there's a grate down there, out of reach. Are your arms longer than mine?"

From below, she hears Banner's voice, "We can get it from here, darlin'! Stand back!"

The captain is already ripping open drawers, stacking cash and coin and Shanti moves to help him, her eyes widening as one drawer reveals a case filled with black diamonds. "Jackpot!"

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Thursday, June 8, 2006 8:11 AM

SAMEERTIA


Gorram double posts!
While I'm at it, Hey, Captain! We could use a new thread if we want to keep playing. Doesn't seem like anyones really posting much though.

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Thursday, June 8, 2006 8:14 AM

DRPAIN


Come back people. Don't leave me here with SameErtia. She'll do things to me and I might not mind.

From the inside the maintenance shaft Banner says to Darren "Oy Darren ya got a plasma cutta on ya?"

Darren nods and says "Yes I do Mr. Banner."

Darren pulls out the plasma cutter from the bag he was carrying and turns it on.

Banner says to Darren "Alroiyt then start cuttin'."

Darren nods again and starts cutting through the grate.

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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?

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Thursday, June 8, 2006 9:34 AM

JOHNTHETHEATREFREAK


Okay new thread time agreed. it'll start once we get away

The Captain finished loading the cargo and pressed the com "Puro let's fly."

"That went well" Shanti said.

"Sure did"

IN SPACE

An alliance cruiser looked on Polythemus. "We're coming for you Shanti"

to be continued in Faolin's crew 2

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Thursday, June 8, 2006 3:02 PM

SAMEERTIA


Shanti laughs as she runs her hands through the box of loose diamonds, "We did it! We robbed the gorram Alliance Federal Bank!"

She's practically bouncing. "Captain, can I keep one? Just one? Please?"

"One. Little one. Very little." He answers, unable to say no to her perky grin. She picks up a medium sized one, and he shakes his head. "Smaller than that. Now get that put away with the rest."



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Thursday, June 8, 2006 4:18 PM

DRPAIN


Darren smiles and says "They can probably hear ya chucklin' from dirtside Shanti."

Shanti says, still giddy "I can't help it Darren it's just that we knocked off an Alliance bank and got away with it."

Shanti continues her giddyness as Darren says to the Captain "So what's next Cap'n?"

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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?

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