GENERAL DISCUSSIONS

Faolin's Crew 3

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UPDATED: Tuesday, July 11, 2006 13:58
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Monday, July 10, 2006 1:04 PM

SAMEERTIA


"I'll get the doctor." Shanti turned and ran back into the galley, practically jamming the com button, she hit it so hard. "Doc, need you upstairs. Banner's... ummm...had a terrible fall."

"You're a lousy liar." Mononoke said quietly from behind her.

It was true. She was. But Darren had just snapped! So, all of them onboard had secrets, did they?

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Monday, July 10, 2006 1:25 PM

DRPAIN


Darren tried not to look at Shanti as Faolin escorted him to his bunk. Once they were out of Shanti's sight, Faolin took Darren by the collar and threw him against the wall. "What the ruttin' hell was that all about Darren!"

Darren looked into Faolin's eyes "I'm sorry sir me and Banner got into a little spat in the galley earlier and I just kinda snapped sir. I promise not ta do it again sir."

"You're gorram right you won't. You're a damn fine mechanic and I'm glad you're working on my boat, but if you do this go se again I will throw you off this boat before we hit dirtside. Dong ma?"

Darren nodded "Yes sir Cap'n. It won't happen again."

Faolin released his grip "Good to hear. The same thing applies to Banner as well. You'll be confined to your bunk. I'll have Shanti bring you some food."

Faolin opened the hatch to Darren's bunk as Darren replied "That'll be fine sir. Again I'm sorry for what I did."

"I know you are Darren." Faolin replied as Darren's hatch closed and he walked back to the bridge.

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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?

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Monday, July 10, 2006 1:50 PM

SAMEERTIA


Shanti, feeling kind of shell-shocked, watched as the doc treated Banner on the galley floor. Seeing the captain headed back to the bridge, she handed him a plate.. Banner's untouched one, "Captain, you should eat."

Then she looked worriedly back out into the Black, where all traces of the brilliant explosion had faded into nothing, "What was the light show about? Do you know?"

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Monday, July 10, 2006 2:17 PM

DRPAIN


"Don't rightly know Shanti. Puro think you can find out?"

"Aye sir I'll get right on it." Puro replied not taking his sight off the vidscreens in front of him.

Meanwhile in Darren's bunk

Darren swore under his breath as he paced around his room "Gorram hun dan Banner. He's lucky I didn't kill him right then and there. Stupid ruttin' idiot."

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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?

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Monday, July 10, 2006 2:39 PM

13


(Ow.)

Eyes opening dimly, Banner feels the blood dripping down his head. Smiling weakly, he struggles to his feet.

"Nice shots, Darren. Might make a man outta you yet."

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'It's Braedan. With an A.'

'Shiny moments aren't a destination any of us get to, and stay put forever. They're unknowable, brief flashes in time. That's what makes them shiny.' -GorramReevers

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Monday, July 10, 2006 2:50 PM

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"That boy's got a little wild streak, don't he?" Banner says, bandaging his head while entering the bridge.

"You really should see to Luap about that," Faolin says, not looking at the mammoth merc.

"Had worse. Kid ain't too bad, once you get him riled up. Reminds me of..." He shakes his head, flashing his gold-capped teeth. "Nothing. Now what exactly is the deal with the fireworks?"

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'It's Braedan. With an A.'

'Shiny moments aren't a destination any of us get to, and stay put forever. They're unknowable, brief flashes in time. That's what makes them shiny.' -GorramReevers

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Tuesday, July 11, 2006 5:30 AM

13


hwa-BUMP!

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'It's Braedan. With an A.'

'Shiny moments aren't a destination any of us get to, and stay put forever. They're unknowable, brief flashes in time. That's what makes them shiny.' -GorramReevers

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Tuesday, July 11, 2006 6:26 AM

SAMEERTIA


Yo, Captain! Gonna fill us in here?

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Tuesday, July 11, 2006 6:36 AM

13


( That'd do us good, Johnny boy! Or we can just call it 'solar winds' or an 'electrical disturbance.' I've tried that before, seems to work out okay! )

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'It's Braedan. With an A.'

'Shiny moments aren't a destination any of us get to, and stay put forever. They're unknowable, brief flashes in time. That's what makes them shiny.' -GorramReevers

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Tuesday, July 11, 2006 7:02 AM

CHOO1701


thought i'd post this sketch of our i did. Its a more "detailed" one i drew in the first one using a description John gave :)



Someone mentioned the captains Foalins ship was called the "Polyphemus"

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"Remember, always be yourself. Unless you suck."-Joss Whedon

ITES RULE!!!!

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Tuesday, July 11, 2006 7:52 AM

JOHNTHETHEATREFREAK


I'm BAAAAAAAAACK

"Captain from what I've figured out review the cortex there was a ship here then that flash and then not"

"Why didn't we see the ship"

"That I don't know, you better let Darren head down to the engine room I think something's going on with the ship"

"Fine," the captain pouted "Go get him Shanti"

"ME"

In the cargo bay

The mysterious black haired figure climbed out of the box that had strangely appeared after the explosion. "Are you sure we want this one back" He whispered into a communication device.

"We want them all back"

"Fine, 'captain' Faolin here I come"

anyone who's involved I would really like to get into Life Aboard Serenity" could you give a little info on the story and tell me a good time to introduce my character?

johnttf

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Tuesday, July 11, 2006 8:44 AM

13


(OoC: Heh. Me, Pain, and Ertia are all Lifers. Ertia's kind of the unofficial leader, so...ask her, I guess. Ah screw it. I'll take this one.)

Life On-Board Serenity is a chain-story, like this one, taking place on (you guessed it) Serenity. All of the canon characters (Mal,River,Book, etc.) are there, plus the authors, who are as follows:

Flywithmecaptn
JRC
Shipscat
Sameertia
DrPain
13
BigWolf
Experiment62

and anybody else I forgot.

Basically, you create a character for the story, and can pretty much be anyone. Although I think we all agree that cyborgs are pushing it. (You were thinking it!) No killing of canon characters or anybody's character without permission, and try to keep character's (and posts) consistent with themselves and the story.

Anything (and I'm sure there's something) I forgot, Ertia or Pain can adapt on what I've said.

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'It's Braedan. With an A.'

'Shiny moments aren't a destination any of us get to, and stay put forever. They're unknowable, brief flashes in time. That's what makes them shiny.' -GorramReevers

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Tuesday, July 11, 2006 8:56 AM

DRPAIN


To add to 13's description:

If you plan on having a relationship with one of the characters, please keep it clean (i.e. there's people under 18 on the thread so no adult content). Oh and my character and Ertia's are in a relationship with each other on the Life Onboard Serenity just so you know.

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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?

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Tuesday, July 11, 2006 9:23 AM

13


Keep the dirty stuff P.Med, if'n you have to.

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'It's Braedan. With an A.'

'Shiny moments aren't a destination any of us get to, and stay put forever. They're unknowable, brief flashes in time. That's what makes them shiny.' -GorramReevers

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Tuesday, July 11, 2006 9:38 AM

SAMEERTIA


ooc.
Yes, what they all said above. Anyone can play, anyone can join, and we have some spare "crew" wandering around the ship if you don't want to make a grand appearance. Just pipe up like you've always been there. :)



Shanti ran down the stairs to Darren's bunk and pressed the release catch override on his door, "Darren? You okay?"

"Yah." Darren starts forward then stops when he sees the former slave cringe away from him. Holding up his hands, he says, "Sorry. Shanti, I'm real sorry. Didn't mean to scare you..."

She holds up one hand, trying to smile at him, "I know. It's shiny, Darren. Really. But we got some kinda problem in the ship and Captain wants you in the engine room."

Grabbing up his toolbelt, he doesn't notice her shy away again as he hurries to his engine.

Shanti is just about to step up the stairs again when a gloved hand covers her mouth, a soft voice hissing in her ear, "Shhh... Just shush, bao bei."

There's a sharp pinpoint stab to her back, and the world goes black. Her last thought is to warn the others.

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Tuesday, July 11, 2006 9:59 AM

DRPAIN


Darren entered the engine room unaware of what was happening to Shanti. He walked over to the com and pressed the button "Cap'n what exactly was it that you wanted me to do?"

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WWJD: What Would Jayne Do?

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Tuesday, July 11, 2006 11:10 AM

13


Alone in his sparse bunk, Banner rummages through his battered canvas pack, eventually drawing out an old-fashioned photo album. The cover is dominated with a black-and-white picture of Banner, a woman, and two little girls, smiling brightly.

Flipping the pages almost mindlessly, the merc tries to bring back what the photographs couldn't. Softly placing the album back in it's rightful place, his eyelids close, pressing against dampness.

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'It's Braedan. With an A.'

'Shiny moments aren't a destination any of us get to, and stay put forever. They're unknowable, brief flashes in time. That's what makes them shiny.' -GorramReevers

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Tuesday, July 11, 2006 11:18 AM

JOHNTHETHEATREFREAK


"Don't actually know Puro says she isn't running as smoothly as normal"

"Okay I'll look around"

The Captain made his way to the galley. When he got ther he saw a sight that brought back memories. "Dr. Griendel"

"Faolan Markson"

"Get the hell off my boat"

thanks for all the help with Life Onboard Serenity. I'll join as soon as I can.

johnttf

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Tuesday, July 11, 2006 1:58 PM

DRPAIN


Hey no problem.

Darren checked and rechecked every part he could access. Frustrated Darren took out the scanner and scanned the engine's thermal readings. He passed the scanner over the underside of the engine and saw a heat fluctuation as he passed over the port induction manifold.

"There ya are ya lil' bugger."

Darren took off the panel covering the manifold and checked all the fittings. Darren smiled as he found a loose one and tightened it. He scanned it again and was satisfied that it was back to normal.

Darren reattached the panel, got up, walked over to the com and pressed the button "Puro try it now."

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